good lob, i like the shading, fix the chin a litle and it would be perfect

Well, except for the face being squashed a bit. I'd say this picture is pretty good for a first time RK pic. (^.^)

Nah, it's not that bad. Maybe drop the cheekbone a little and cut a little off the chin, and I would say perfect! kenshin is a hard character to draw sometimes. I should know, I draw him all the time! Great job for a first try!