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    john3:16

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/12/08 | Reply

    @Mizukage:

    Yeah I decided to be lazy when I was was coloring this.:D Thank you for the advice though.:]

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    Mizukage

    Otaku Legend | Posted 11/12/08 | Reply

    I like the face and the shirt design. Looks like you put in much effort coming up with this =) It's rare finding a half-body picture from you. You always draw faces lol.

    You could probably make his hips a little bigger, personally I think it's a tad small even for a guy, haha. The colouring can be also improved, say... varying the colour tones on the folds on his shirt. Also, I notice you colour really hard, I can see the stroke lines clearly here, lol. I suggest you colour more gently and avoid using straight strokes... maybe circular ones? Well, the whole idea is to make it look smoother ^^

    Great job on this and all the best for the contest!

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    Teapot Domescam

    Otaku Legend | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply

    Whoa you a supastar! Lol loook at you with that buff bod and ready freddy attitude. I love it, totally diggin it! AHHH! Hah hah I really want that hoodie. That´d be awesome

    XOXO

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    Angel Zakuro

    bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply

    Aww!! Cute!! Awesome hair and details..wow, the coloring is great. :3 Nice job!

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    Lissa2

    Otakuite++ | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply

    This looks cool! Nice Job!

    ~Lissa~

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    TrinityLight

    Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply

    this is flippen kool :D i love et!