I like the face and the shirt design. Looks like you put in much effort coming up with this =) It's rare finding a half-body picture from you. You always draw faces lol.
You could probably make his hips a little bigger, personally I think it's a tad small even for a guy, haha. The colouring can be also improved, say... varying the colour tones on the folds on his shirt. Also, I notice you colour really hard, I can see the stroke lines clearly here, lol. I suggest you colour more gently and avoid using straight strokes... maybe circular ones? Well, the whole idea is to make it look smoother ^^
Great job on this and all the best for the contest!
Whoa you a supastar! Lol loook at you with that buff bod and ready freddy attitude. I love it, totally diggin it! AHHH! Hah hah I really want that hoodie. That´d be awesome
john3:16
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/12/08 | Reply
@Mizukage:
Yeah I decided to be lazy when I was was coloring this.:D Thank you for the advice though.:]
Mizukage
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/12/08 | Reply
I like the face and the shirt design. Looks like you put in much effort coming up with this =) It's rare finding a half-body picture from you. You always draw faces lol.
You could probably make his hips a little bigger, personally I think it's a tad small even for a guy, haha. The colouring can be also improved, say... varying the colour tones on the folds on his shirt. Also, I notice you colour really hard, I can see the stroke lines clearly here, lol. I suggest you colour more gently and avoid using straight strokes... maybe circular ones? Well, the whole idea is to make it look smoother ^^
Great job on this and all the best for the contest!
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply
Whoa you a supastar! Lol loook at you with that buff bod and ready freddy attitude. I love it, totally diggin it! AHHH! Hah hah I really want that hoodie. That´d be awesome
XOXO
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply
Aww!! Cute!! Awesome hair and details..wow, the coloring is great. :3 Nice job!
Lissa2
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply
This looks cool! Nice Job!
~Lissa~
TrinityLight
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/11/08 | Reply
this is flippen kool :D i love et!