he seems a little smooshed O_o work on some of the proportions also such as the hands and the neck =] just some friendly tips =]

for the first time that's really good!

that's uber-awesome for a first try!!! love the shading!!! i shall say no shit, for i see no shit!! hehe keep up the good work!!!

shit!lol.thats really good.much better than anything i would ever draw.

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Shit. lol j/k great job, i could never draw that good. keep it up!!! :D

If its shit, its Kick ass shit. Hella good for your first time drawing InuYasha. Good Job!

its really good i like it