dunno the anime/manga, but regardless of where the character is from, its very good lineart, because i can tell taht is a rather complicated postition to draw someone!! lol twisting around and all!! i think you pulled it off tho!! everything looks great, done to the last finger!! well, her uhh..breast looks like it is... i dunno lol. hmm how do i describe, its like you drew the profile view of it, but the rest of her body is like 3/4ths turn. you know what i mean? i dunno, its just her bb so it doesn't really matter ^^;; haha!! i hope you accept a bit of constructive criticism, it wasn't supposed to point out mistakes, it just so you can always improve with the next pic!! just sometimes ppl don't give it in the right way, so i hope i did alright!!! =]

onto the next pic!!! =D