It's really good except.... ummmmm.... how shall I say this? That girl's body is reeaally weird.

Geez... it must've taken much time to draw all that. Nice work, though ^^

Lemme guess...atleast two hours? Or one... But: the first thig i noticed was the womans body...alien? Secondly; you need more shadow and light. And thers a mess; wheres the main character?