i think she looks realy great and i love the color pinck on her and on her expresion
your femails are starting to look better expresion wise
try giving her longer sholders [ation heroins tend to have more defined sholders [not too aksented though cause it can cause her to look maskulin]
but the legs need some work try making them 1/3 longer in both thigh and [whats the other part with the sin called again?]
i have problems fiting all of that on the paper XD *scraches head*
giving charecters longer legs adds a more ...errrr gracefulll[found the word] afect[and i guess its not hard to look at eather ]
XD
Last edited by red kie at 12:20:51 AM EST on December 28, 2008.
She has so much spunky attitude - I love it! I would fix up her ankles and calves a little since they look disproportionate right now. I really like her look though.
If there's nothing wrong with me, then there must be something wrong with the universe!
krokun
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply
she soo cute and cool at the same time!!! awesome job i love her outfit and pose!
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply
i think she looks realy great and i love the color pinck on her and on her expresion![](http://www.theotaku.com/global/images/icons/female-smile.gif)
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your femails are starting to look better expresion wise
try giving her longer sholders [ation heroins tend to have more defined sholders [not too aksented though cause it can cause her to look maskulin]
but the legs need some work try making them 1/3 longer in both thigh and [whats the other part with the sin called again?]
i have problems fiting all of that on the paper XD *scraches head*
giving charecters longer legs adds a more ...errrr gracefulll[found the word] afect[and i guess its not hard to look at eather
XD
Last edited by red kie at 12:20:51 AM EST on December 28, 2008.
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
Bulma
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply
She has so much spunky attitude - I love it! I would fix up her ankles and calves a little since they look disproportionate right now. I really like her look though.
If there's nothing wrong with me, then there must be something wrong with the universe!
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply
Make the body structure a bit longet and it´s gona work great with te legs .I think you just need to shape them a bit to have an awesome anatomy .
Angel
innocent heart
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/26/08 | Reply
Aw she is a cute little character^^ Hehe, she is all pink! XD I love her design though^^ Keep up the great work Jerry! *hugs*