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    krokun

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply

    she soo cute and cool at the same time!!! awesome job i love her outfit and pose!

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    red kie

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply

    i think she looks realy great and i love the color pinck on her and on her expresion
    your femails are starting to look better expresion wise
    try giving her longer sholders [ation heroins tend to have more defined sholders [not too aksented though cause it can cause her to look maskulin]
    but the legs need some work try making them 1/3 longer in both thigh and [whats the other part with the sin called again?]
    i have problems fiting all of that on the paper XD *scraches head*
    giving charecters longer legs adds a more ...errrr gracefulll[found the word] afect[and i guess its not hard to look at eather ]
    XD


    Last edited by red kie at 12:20:51 AM EST on December 28, 2008.


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    Bulma

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply

    She has so much spunky attitude - I love it! I would fix up her ankles and calves a little since they look disproportionate right now. I really like her look though.


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    AngelBest Dream

    Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/27/08 | Reply

    Make the body structure a bit longet and it´s gona work great with te legs .I think you just need to shape them a bit to have an awesome anatomy .

    Angel

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    innocent heart

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/26/08 | Reply

    Aw she is a cute little character^^ Hehe, she is all pink! XD I love her design though^^ Keep up the great work Jerry! *hugs*