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    harvestmoonluvr

    HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/13/10 | Reply

    @MashMadness:

    xD B-but realism is so hard ;w;
    Thank you so much, but I still think I've got a while to go :D

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    MashMadness

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/13/10 | Reply

    Ya know...I would absolutely love to see you attempt realism again now that you've gained even more impossibly wonderful art skills. AND YOU KNOW HOW TO COLOR REALISTICALLY NOW! I think.

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    Senior Otaku | Posted 05/22/09 | Reply

    Alright, I'll try my hand at constructive criticism. Maybe you could try to make the eye a little realer. Like I got started on drawing human eyes with trying cat eyes (anime eyes are still better btw). Other than that, I love it! Realism......i wish we had fantasy-ism....lol......

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    Otakuite++ | Posted 01/17/09 | Reply

    Ooh, AWESOME! I love her hair. :)
    And the different shapes in the window was a nice touch. :3
    Although it looks more like Anime than realism, you still did an awesome job. :D

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    HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/15/09 | Reply

    @MewChero:

    thanks~ you know i dont mind "constructive criticism" at all, right? C:
    i just don't like it when someone walks up to you and says, "You suck" and walks away. *grinds teeth*
    yeeeah i guess people didn't exactly get the memo saying i can't color realistically xD
    i was just talking about the overall sketch...but either way its still cartoonish. xD
    i'll just stick with anime :3
    thanks for the advice!

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    MewChero

    Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply

    Not to be mean, but it looks slightly more realistic than your other drawings, but I think that the way you colored it and drew the eyes takes away from the realism. I'm not that great at realism, but I'm learning...
    If you want to make realism look real and have color try colored pencils, pastels or paint.(thougt paint is really hard)
    For the eyes just look at real people's eyes and practice them... Only if you want to continue this.
    This was a pretty good first attempt! (the picture still looks awesome!)Maybe an art class would help. (Don't read books they don't help with realistic...) If you draw more you just need to really look at the thing you're drawing to make it look real.
    ....Just helping....
    ~Chero~

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    Chinatsu

    Otakuite+ | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    Wow, this is really good! I love the emergency exit sign, the detail is good. It's not exactly realism though, maybe more of a crossover between manga and realism.

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    Love Me Tender

    Otakuite | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    That's not realism at all, it looks like all your other pictures...

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    Uta Okami

    Otakuite+ | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    This looks great! You draw way better than I ever could

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    The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    I know who that is! Can't say her name though! XD You did an amazing job on realism! I just think this is completely awesome! Fantastic job, Den-chan!

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    SHSL Lamebutt (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    I KNOW WHO THAT IS~! :DDD
    Except... her hair is more brown in RL, but that's okayyyy~

    It looks a bit more on the anime side 'cause of how you colored & outlined it, but not bad for a first try~

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    Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    I actually think you did a great job on the windows!
    And her hair does look really good^_^ As does the light effect from the DS
    It looks more anime-ish than realistic, but still, it's great! *hugs*

    ~S.G~

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    ponyochan

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply

    oh wow! it's really good! i like it a lot,and i think the windows look fine... i couldn't draw real people if i wanted to.....but my friends would certainly appreciate it lol.......

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    TheAngelRaine

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply

    Because of the coloring it doesnt really look realistic its more animeish.
    Still though its a great picture^^

    Rai-chan

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply

    It looks awesome!lol and I think I know who it is X3 Great job!

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    Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply

    It looks great! ^_^ I fail at drawing side-views, for anime-y stuff, and realism. xD I also love the hair and coloring. ^_^