Ya know...I would absolutely love to see you attempt realism again now that you've gained even more impossibly wonderful art skills. AND YOU KNOW HOW TO COLOR REALISTICALLY NOW! I think.
Alright, I'll try my hand at constructive criticism. Maybe you could try to make the eye a little realer. Like I got started on drawing human eyes with trying cat eyes (anime eyes are still better btw). Other than that, I love it! Realism......i wish we had fantasy-ism....lol......
Ooh, AWESOME! I love her hair. :)
And the different shapes in the window was a nice touch. :3
Although it looks more like Anime than realism, you still did an awesome job. :D
thanks~ you know i dont mind "constructive criticism" at all, right? C:
i just don't like it when someone walks up to you and says, "You suck" and walks away. *grinds teeth*
yeeeah i guess people didn't exactly get the memo saying i can't color realistically xD
i was just talking about the overall sketch...but either way its still cartoonish. xD
i'll just stick with anime :3
thanks for the advice!
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply
Not to be mean, but it looks slightly more realistic than your other drawings, but I think that the way you colored it and drew the eyes takes away from the realism. I'm not that great at realism, but I'm learning...
If you want to make realism look real and have color try colored pencils, pastels or paint.(thougt paint is really hard)
For the eyes just look at real people's eyes and practice them... Only if you want to continue this.
This was a pretty good first attempt! (the picture still looks awesome!)Maybe an art class would help. (Don't read books they don't help with realistic...) If you draw more you just need to really look at the thing you're drawing to make it look real.
....Just helping....
~Chero~
Wow, this is really good! I love the emergency exit sign, the detail is good. It's not exactly realism though, maybe more of a crossover between manga and realism.
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
I actually think you did a great job on the windows!
And her hair does look really good^_^ As does the light effect from the DS
It looks more anime-ish than realistic, but still, it's great! *hugs*
oh wow! it's really good! i like it a lot,and i think the windows look fine... i couldn't draw real people if i wanted to.....but my friends would certainly appreciate it lol.......
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/13/10 | Reply
@MashMadness:
xD B-but realism is so hard ;w;
Thank you so much, but I still think I've got a while to go :D
MashMadness
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/13/10 | Reply
Ya know...I would absolutely love to see you attempt realism again now that you've gained even more impossibly wonderful art skills. AND YOU KNOW HOW TO COLOR REALISTICALLY NOW! I think.
sakura dancer
Senior Otaku | Posted 05/22/09 | Reply
Alright, I'll try my hand at constructive criticism. Maybe you could try to make the eye a little realer. Like I got started on drawing human eyes with trying cat eyes (anime eyes are still better btw). Other than that, I love it! Realism......i wish we had fantasy-ism....lol......
Manami1572
Otakuite++ | Posted 01/17/09 | Reply
Ooh, AWESOME! I love her hair. :)
And the different shapes in the window was a nice touch. :3
Although it looks more like Anime than realism, you still did an awesome job. :D
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/15/09 | Reply
@MewChero:
thanks~ you know i dont mind "constructive criticism" at all, right? C:
i just don't like it when someone walks up to you and says, "You suck" and walks away. *grinds teeth*
yeeeah i guess people didn't exactly get the memo saying i can't color realistically xD
i was just talking about the overall sketch...but either way its still cartoonish. xD
i'll just stick with anime :3
thanks for the advice!
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply
Not to be mean, but it looks slightly more realistic than your other drawings, but I think that the way you colored it and drew the eyes takes away from the realism. I'm not that great at realism, but I'm learning...
If you want to make realism look real and have color try colored pencils, pastels or paint.(thougt paint is really hard)
For the eyes just look at real people's eyes and practice them... Only if you want to continue this.
This was a pretty good first attempt! (the picture still looks awesome!)Maybe an art class would help. (Don't read books they don't help with realistic...) If you draw more you just need to really look at the thing you're drawing to make it look real.
....Just helping....
~Chero~
Chinatsu
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
Wow, this is really good! I love the emergency exit sign, the detail is good. It's not exactly realism though, maybe more of a crossover between manga and realism.
Love Me Tender
Otakuite | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
That's not realism at all, it looks like all your other pictures...
Uta Okami
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
This looks great! You draw way better than I ever could
animelover7310
The Insane Writer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
I know who that is! Can't say her name though! XD You did an amazing job on realism! I just think this is completely awesome! Fantastic job, Den-chan!
KeybladeMewKasa
SHSL Lamebutt (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
I KNOW WHO THAT IS~! :DDD
Except... her hair is more brown in RL, but that's okayyyy~
It looks a bit more on the anime side 'cause of how you colored & outlined it, but not bad for a first try~
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
I actually think you did a great job on the windows!
And her hair does look really good^_^ As does the light effect from the DS
It looks more anime-ish than realistic, but still, it's great! *hugs*
~S.G~
ponyochan
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
oh wow! it's really good! i like it a lot,and i think the windows look fine... i couldn't draw real people if i wanted to.....but my friends would certainly appreciate it lol.......
TheAngelRaine
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Because of the coloring it doesnt really look realistic its more animeish.
Still though its a great picture^^
Rai-chan
otakufangirl
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
It looks awesome!lol and I think I know who it is X3 Great job!
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
It looks great! ^_^ I fail at drawing side-views, for anime-y stuff, and realism. xD I also love the hair and coloring. ^_^