Sure, no probs. Sometimes tho' some people say nothing, and they say something like "So what? It's good already, etc." It hasn't happened to me yet, but it might one day...
HALLELUJAH! some constructive criticism! finally! hee hee i know kimono's are supposed to be tight,originally i had aioke's more loose but i covered them up more,tho i didn't know about the kimono's being the opposite way (thanx!) and thanx for the critisism! keep that up,i'd always love to know where i can improve more,cuz when i find faults i correct them emediately ;)
This is a very good line art, nice and clean! Just 2 things, Don't hate me for it please.
- Kimonos.... >_< The Japanese wear it the opposite way. A good way to remember this is to think of the collar of the kimono like a "y" So if it's the wrong way, then that's wrong.
- Aiko & Rishi Umm.... How to say this? Okay, the kimonos are kinda *ahem* loose. Usually men can have loose kimonos, but women usually make it a lot tighter.
Overall, it's a very good job and it's very, very slick~ I hope I didn't hurt your feelings. Sorry if I did. >_<
CrimsonANBU
EDIT: I forgot to say, *huggles+ faves* :D
Last edited by CrimsonANBU at 11:02:18 PM EST on January 28, 2009.
smoking crimson
Sunrise (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/31/09 | Reply
@xXxShiaxXx:
Good advice? awwww, that means I'm a good critique? *melts into pile of goo*
lol. :P
CrimsonA
Mighty RED RANGER
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/31/09 | Reply
@smoking crimson:
well,when it does,just know that their grouchez for not accepting good advice. =)
smoking crimson
Sunrise (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
@xXxShiaxXx:
Sure, no probs. Sometimes tho' some people say nothing, and they say something like "So what? It's good already, etc." It hasn't happened to me yet, but it might one day...
Mighty RED RANGER
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
@smoking crimson:
HALLELUJAH! some constructive criticism! finally! hee hee i know kimono's are supposed to be tight,originally i had aioke's more loose but i covered them up more,tho i didn't know about the kimono's being the opposite way (thanx!) and thanx for the critisism! keep that up,i'd always love to know where i can improve more,cuz when i find faults i correct them emediately ;)
~xXxShiaxXx
smoking crimson
Sunrise (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/28/09 | Reply
This is a very good line art, nice and clean! Just 2 things, Don't hate me for it please.
- Kimonos.... >_< The Japanese wear it the opposite way. A good way to remember this is to think of the collar of the kimono like a "y" So if it's the wrong way, then that's wrong.
- Aiko & Rishi Umm.... How to say this? Okay, the kimonos are kinda *ahem* loose. Usually men can have loose kimonos, but women usually make it a lot tighter.
Overall, it's a very good job and it's very, very slick~ I hope I didn't hurt your feelings. Sorry if I did. >_<
CrimsonANBU
EDIT: I forgot to say, *huggles+ faves* :D
Last edited by CrimsonANBU at 11:02:18 PM EST on January 28, 2009.
Mighty RED RANGER
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@Team Plasma N:
thank you!
Team Plasma N
Sinbad of Sindria (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/26/09 | Reply
wow this is a cute line art
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/26/09 | Reply
@KoInu kyan:
HMMM,let me think about it... DUUUH! IT'S URZ OF COURSE U CAN! XD
KoInu kyan
Grand Otaku | Posted 01/26/09 | Reply
OMG SO KYUUUTE! <3<3
Can Rishi color it?
~Rishi, teh genki girl~
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/26/09 | Reply
ah! so that was his name! i thought it was that! >D
TheDarkAngel
Pathetic Diabetic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/25/09 | Reply
OH! It's soooo kawaii!!! I can't wait to see it colored! AWESOME JOB! (>_o)b
Ah, and naruto is (c) of Mashashi Kishimoto.
WHEE! I wanna see it in color soooo bad! Love it!
~Yosei~
And, then... I met you.