I'm actually doodling a bit now. I'm contemplating whether or not I should upload these small thumbnail sketches. They'd go in the draft folder of course but it's something at least. >>"
OMJ u took meh word...
and OMJ! u can read meh mind!!! XDDD
I got in a doodling mode today (home alone... yays), so maybe i will fix it O.o... or not...
O.o ooh~ long comment :3
I think I know what to improve on. :D When i look at it again i could see some things i could fix ~ The pic was originally supposed to be just the last panel but I suddenly wanted to try a little comic page... nothing serious in my mind, just some doodles.
:D
I like the artwork. But I cannot say the same for the composition of the short comic. I became confused as to what was going on when I first went through it. Like I said, the artwork is fine as it is. It's just that it may not convey enough information to the reader so that they know exactly what is happening.
So in other words, you'd have to explain before I'd understand, dear. Is she swatting a small fairy or something of the like? :I
I feel really awful not being able to give you advice on how to improve. Only if I knew what story you were trying to convey, would I be able to give a better comment. Perhaps if there were a page before it or after with more comic? :]
::*wants to do a fanart of that epic pose in the end*:: xDD
Last edited by Le kun at 9:05:56 PM EST on January 27, 2009.
Animatious
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/28/09 | Reply
@krow666:
:D sank-ju XD
R A W R~ purru purru. . .
krow666
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
The Shirt
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@Animatious:
::*smiles*:: Thanks. Alright. I'll post them up in a little bit. Tonight definitely though if not now.
Animatious
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@The Shirt:
num num XD ur avi ish so cute :3
I wanna see them sketchies. :D
R A W R~ X3 . . .
The Shirt
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@Animatious:
I'm actually doodling a bit now. I'm contemplating whether or not I should upload these small thumbnail sketches. They'd go in the draft folder of course but it's something at least. >>"
Animatious
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@The Shirt:
OMJ u took meh word...
and OMJ! u can read meh mind!!! XDDD
I got in a doodling mode today (home alone... yays), so maybe i will fix it O.o... or not...
R A W R~ wiggley wiggley. . .
The Shirt
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@Animatious:
^^; Coolbeans.. Long as you have an idea. But for some reason, I get the feeling you won't be fixing it anytime soon due to laziness. lmao
Animatious
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
@The Shirt:
O.o ooh~ long comment :3
I think I know what to improve on. :D When i look at it again i could see some things i could fix ~ The pic was originally supposed to be just the last panel but I suddenly wanted to try a little comic page... nothing serious in my mind, just some doodles.
:D
R A W R~ ooh~ now i have an idea X3. . .
The Shirt
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
I like the artwork. But I cannot say the same for the composition of the short comic. I became confused as to what was going on when I first went through it. Like I said, the artwork is fine as it is. It's just that it may not convey enough information to the reader so that they know exactly what is happening.
So in other words, you'd have to explain before I'd understand, dear. Is she swatting a small fairy or something of the like? :I
I feel really awful not being able to give you advice on how to improve. Only if I knew what story you were trying to convey, would I be able to give a better comment. Perhaps if there were a page before it or after with more comic? :]
::*wants to do a fanart of that epic pose in the end*:: xDD
Last edited by Le kun at 9:05:56 PM EST on January 27, 2009.
Team Plasma N
Sinbad of Sindria (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/27/09 | Reply
Oh you could have submmited this in the fan comic section but it doesn't matter because this is really good!!! :D