Very nice. Another suggestion: Because the thingamabobber they wear when they're in their vanships, like she's wearing in the pic, they're kinda baggy so I would suggest making it look a little less... uh... tight. O_o;;;

Yes, Lavie is a nifty character. ^-^ Suggestion: try making the lines of the face less wobbly. Nice job with the line art of her cloths. I quite agree with your statement about anime. ^^