This site need to pay more attention on realism...I think this is really good. I really like her skin tone. Maybe its a little too late to give you feedback but hopefully this'll help in future drawings. A girl with a sad face riding a swing almost looks magical to me, so a little orangey or yellow glow/highlight on the skin would be really effective on making this piece stand out, it looks a little dull now.
Don't be discouraged because its realism, you should continue and make more. ^^
mai rionette
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/30/09 | Reply
This site need to pay more attention on realism...I think this is really good. I really like her skin tone. Maybe its a little too late to give you feedback but hopefully this'll help in future drawings. A girl with a sad face riding a swing almost looks magical to me, so a little orangey or yellow glow/highlight on the skin would be really effective on making this piece stand out, it looks a little dull now.
Don't be discouraged because its realism, you should continue and make more. ^^
KungPowChicken
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/21/09 | Reply
I think it looks nice!
but I'm not sure about the hand on the right side..
looks kinda big to me x.x
maybe cause the color is smudged..
great job!
keep it up!
good luck in the contest!