T__T Sorry I didn't comment on this earlier Sophia-chan, yesterday was a really busy day for me!
But anyways moving on to the piccy! The first thing I noticed was SUMMER! She looks gorgeous and I really like how you did her eyes and hair! ^^ You did such a wonderful job with all of their outfits and Riiya's dress is beautiful and cute!(I'd totally wear it) ^^
A little suggestion I have is maybe adding a bit more joints to the arms(like elbows and such)~ that's pretty much it though! Keep up the fantastical work Sophia-chan and thankies so much for adding Riiya in there! ^^

THIS LOOKS SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I LOVEZ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

OHMAIGAWD!!! :D This looks sooo~o amazing~!! :D
SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE~!<333 :> =]
Amazing job, Sophia-chan! I can see you've improved~^-^
And I love Summer's dress~ :D And her hair~! :D And look at Riiya~ Adorable! X3
Ooo~ Hollow Bastion in the place where we had that huge 1000 Nobody fight? That's what I thought it was X3 Cute~! Very cute~! X3 *hugs* *faves*

Aaaaaaw, this is so beautiful! Uve really improved alot and everything looks wonderful~!!!!! I love the dresses u made for summer n riiya~! :D Keep up the great work sophia-chan!!!! X333 *hugs fav* >u<

@khismylife:

XD I almost forgot so it's no biggie XD

AHAHA~ Oh my gosh I love this! XD
There's so much colors~ And the dresses look wonderful <3
lol Riiya's even in there too. ^^
Good luck in the contest, m'dear; this is a great entry!
-hugs-

-- アリス

@SojiRem:

lolz I knew you would want to lolz

omg art trade almost forgot that hehe sorry *feels stupid* xD

I have a strange fedish to draw this now.........XD but I've got work to do XD including the art trade *refuses to forget*

Axel and Roxas sure pull off the tuxedo look. xD;

This looks amazing, Sophia-chan! You're improving so much! >w<

I think the bg turned out pretty good. I could tell exactly where they were, so that's good. :3

Keep up the awesome job, Sophia-chan! *huggles* ^___^

EKKKKKKK
YOU'VE IMPROVED SOOOO MUCHHHHHH
:'DDDDDD
I like the way you drew Roxas's and Axel's hair~
The dresses are so pretty too!
awesome job Sophia-chan! *hugs*