The body structure and the shading are very well managed.I like the lined details at the shoes and the t-shirt .Great work at the 3-D of the ball,it looks very realistic.The hair detials are so awesome,good work with those highlights .
I see you used many lines to shape de face.If you want to add more detail to it I suggest you just use shadows and no lines(maybe just at the eyes).I can see your eye style really got a lot better,now work at those shades at the face to pop the nose and the mouth XD.
I'm really amazed.. your really good at realism.. I love the dark shades.. and I think the wrinkles in her clothes are fantastically done... you did an amazing job sis.. :D awsome
I'd like to see the reference photo! But anyhoo, you did pretty good. :) I do think her face needs some work though. The lines around her mouth look more like old wrinkles--poor girl looks 80. XD J/K. *hugs* But yeah, they're too dark, and her nose's position looks odd...maybe too high or crooked? But hey, realism is hard. ~__~' I suck at it!! This is really good~ So keep practicing! It's fun! ^_^ Really cute little sister. <3
You did a good job! But I do think the lines around her mouth maker her look older than she probably is. Maybe if you didn't make them as dark as they are? You really are improving, Nee-san!
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
The body structure and the shading are very well managed.I like the lined details at the shoes and the t-shirt .Great work at the 3-D of the ball,it looks very realistic.The hair detials are so awesome,good work with those highlights .
I see you used many lines to shape de face.If you want to add more detail to it I suggest you just use shadows and no lines(maybe just at the eyes).I can see your eye style really got a lot better,now work at those shades at the face to pop the nose and the mouth XD.
Angel
cati0vz
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/09/09 | Reply
I'm really amazed.. your really good at realism.. I love the dark shades.. and I think the wrinkles in her clothes are fantastically done... you did an amazing job sis.. :D awsome
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 04/07/09 | Reply
I'd like to see the reference photo! But anyhoo, you did pretty good. :) I do think her face needs some work though. The lines around her mouth look more like old wrinkles--poor girl looks 80. XD J/K. *hugs* But yeah, they're too dark, and her nose's position looks odd...maybe too high or crooked? But hey, realism is hard. ~__~' I suck at it!! This is really good~ So keep practicing! It's fun! ^_^ Really cute little sister. <3
Mercury Dragon
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/07/09 | Reply
You did a good job! But I do think the lines around her mouth maker her look older than she probably is. Maybe if you didn't make them as dark as they are? You really are improving, Nee-san!