ummm ... nice one! :))
girl in the center looks really gorgeous! ^^ anatomy & details looks great /only maybe her (& also girl in the left side) panties looks a bit too angular & severe/ :]
girl in the left side have a buatiful face! =]
but u still need to work more on anatomy, because girls in the bouth sides (their bodys) /except girl in the center/ looks a bit too disproportionate!
sry for criticing so small articles! =]
great work!
JnVbt
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/17/09 | Reply
ummm ... nice one! :))
girl in the center looks really gorgeous! ^^ anatomy & details looks great /only maybe her (& also girl in the left side) panties looks a bit too angular & severe/ :]
girl in the left side have a buatiful face! =]
but u still need to work more on anatomy, because girls in the bouth sides (their bodys) /except girl in the center/ looks a bit too disproportionate!
sry for criticing so small articles! =]
great work!
littlemissharriet
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/15/09 | Reply
great job at the shading ... keep it up
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/15/09 | Reply
wow your prity good at drawing bodys,im not but im improving ^^
you did an awesome job
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