no i think it looks really good honestly!

Thanks for the reply. I know that real life drawing shouldn't have lines, so I try to make them kinda light. Kind of a stylistic touch.;) But it wasn't controlled as much in this, and I regret that as well.

Its really good. However, next time you try "reality characters" just remember that people dont have lines. Also,try stark contrasts, not different shades of grey. I know Im not the best, but I have a few "realities" if you want to check them out.

I like xXGothicChicXx's idea... was this drawn from life, or memory? Either way, I'ts very nice, especially her expression.