This is so pretty~
I love how the shadows are so dark, it adds a nice touch
And her hair looks great too. All flowy and stuff
The bg is great. The random numbers seem really work with her, and the vocaloid thing (I think? lol I'm not really into vocaloid)
The bright circles also add a nice touch
Nice job~
I don't know about you, but if you were a serious Miku fan and you paid a bit more attention to the details, you'd know that this isn't at all like Miku. For one, Aone Star's hair color is blue, not blue green like Miku's, and it's completely long and only LOOKS separated to add effect. Miku's, however, is completely separated by her hair clips into two pigtails that extend off the sides. Not to mention, there isn't an 01 on her left shoulder like Miku.
The size of the bust and legs are completely due to Sayoko-chan's style, it has nothing to do with the actually character themselves.
And if you are going to give critique, make sure to back it up by saying the correct way on how it SHOULD be drawn then. If you point out a mistake in the legs,be sure to back it up and say how it should be correctly done. Just a bit of advice.
Now on to the pic.
Sayoko-chan, this looks absolutely beautiful, I'm really sorry I didn't comment on this earlier, Korea has been hectic for me lately T__T But anyways~ I really love the colors, you are simply a master with highlights and different media and I'm absolutely envious! @__@ I really love the details on this piece, and I don't know about you, but I think the legs look fantastic and just fine to me. Girls stand in a more feminine fashion and you captured that with her pose.
The shadows on this look fantastic and you've got an incredible eye for detail Sayoko-chan! Keep it up my friend<3
Last edited by aragorn1014 at 9:05:41 PM EDT on June 15, 2009.
aaw, thank u X3 heh, wait till u read mypharohloveless's comment (3 comments below), that prsn's absolutely convinced it's miku for some reason >_<; and hasn't replied to me yet, i even sent a pm, urgh >_>
Thank u so much for ur comment TwT It has been bothering me for a while since that comment XD lol
Awww...I think she's pretty!
Actually I don't she looks like Hatsune that much.
Maybe the outfit has bits and such that're similar but the hair is like blue and Hatsune's was like greenish blue.
I like how you added the numbers in the bg. Adds a nice touch.
You did a fine job on this piece Sayoko-chan and it's one of my faves from ya.
Have a nice day~
...Etto... This isn't Miku ^^; I know she looks a lot like her but still >_<; (Now i regret posting her OTL)
I do appreciate ur comment though. ^ ^
Um okies, but would u mind telling how the leg is weird? I would like to better learn my mistakes and get it right the next time. :3
Last edited by RSRKingdomStars at 3:31:56 PM EDT on June 14, 2009.
It's really nice on a stand alone ... but on A Miku point of view ... it isn't, for one Miku isn't that busty, and the legs are sorta wierd the way they are drawn ... i'd be better if you made this Luka ... at least the body and hair would be right
Haha, now that I look at it, she rly does look like luka a bit XD I made her b4 luka came out so i had no idea XD
Thank u for ur nice compliments X3 I tried to make her looks very adult in this pic, so I got what I intended X3
Ooh, I can't wait to see how ur vocaloid comes out~ X3 I bet she'll be a beautiful vocaloid~
*hugs*
Aw what a cute Vocaloid! :D I love her outfit! She looks kind of like a mix of Miku and Luka. ^__^ I love her style though! Its hip-hoppish and has a sexy look to it! XD Lol. :)
Great vocaloid you have here Rachel! I should make a vocaloid too, sounds like a fun idea. :) Keep up the amazing work! ♥
Oop I actually replied to that comment on the dragon pic XD Here, I'll copy and paste it on here for u: oh nono, this isn't the art trade art, this is the dragon ive been working on b4 we did the trade XD sorry i wasn't clear on it ^^; I'm still working on the art trade dragon :3 btw, can the girl riding the dragon be the prsn on ur icon? XD
Im very happy that you colored this one.I will finsih my part of the arttrad every soon,it´s just going very well .And how are u doin Reich ,seems you are really working on the commics .
I was very surprised how u finishes your art trade so fast lol.Well I wanted to do something like humm combining styles but it´s ok , seems it´s gona take a white to color my part XD.
wow your so great now !!! i love it
it is interesting to look back at ppls art and see how far we have come lols
i love the coloring and the praportions are perfect! and love the blue hair and back ground!
Yeah, I like the third one too XD I wanted to keep her skin blank, but I haven't submitted a pic of her with her skin color so I just colored it in, so I added the WIP urls to show all of 'em XD
thank u Kara-chan >u< *hugs*
Haha, don't worry I just made a small square of #'s and used the pattern bucket tool to make it appear throughout the whole page. ^^ If I did do it by hand, I'd be really proud of myslef XD *hugs*
wow sayoko she looks amazing!
I really really love her hair! lolz her outfit looks great too. And I have to say that highlighter trick looks pretty neat! Look at you the little smarty figureing tha tone out. lolz
Great job with this one! ^^
chibi nyan
Otakuite+ | Posted 07/07/09 | Reply
YOUR AMAZING! i wish i had a scanner... maybe i could do something kewl, too. your really inspiring!!
arcticwulf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/03/09 | Reply
This is so pretty~
I love how the shadows are so dark, it adds a nice touch
And her hair looks great too. All flowy and stuff
The bg is great. The random numbers seem really work with her, and the vocaloid thing (I think? lol I'm not really into vocaloid)
The bright circles also add a nice touch
Nice job~
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/09 | Reply
@mypharohloveless:
I don't know about you, but if you were a serious Miku fan and you paid a bit more attention to the details, you'd know that this isn't at all like Miku. For one, Aone Star's hair color is blue, not blue green like Miku's, and it's completely long and only LOOKS separated to add effect. Miku's, however, is completely separated by her hair clips into two pigtails that extend off the sides. Not to mention, there isn't an 01 on her left shoulder like Miku.
The size of the bust and legs are completely due to Sayoko-chan's style, it has nothing to do with the actually character themselves.
And if you are going to give critique, make sure to back it up by saying the correct way on how it SHOULD be drawn then. If you point out a mistake in the legs,be sure to back it up and say how it should be correctly done. Just a bit of advice.
Now on to the pic.
Sayoko-chan, this looks absolutely beautiful, I'm really sorry I didn't comment on this earlier, Korea has been hectic for me lately T__T But anyways~ I really love the colors, you are simply a master with highlights and different media and I'm absolutely envious! @__@ I really love the details on this piece, and I don't know about you, but I think the legs look fantastic and just fine to me. Girls stand in a more feminine fashion and you captured that with her pose.
The shadows on this look fantastic and you've got an incredible eye for detail Sayoko-chan! Keep it up my friend<3
Last edited by aragorn1014 at 9:05:41 PM EDT on June 15, 2009.
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/15/09 | Reply
@LunaLei:
aaw, thank u X3
heh, wait till u read mypharohloveless's comment (3 comments below), that prsn's absolutely convinced it's miku for some reason >_<; and hasn't replied to me yet, i even sent a pm, urgh >_>
Thank u so much for ur comment TwT It has been bothering me for a while since that comment XD lol
*hugglez*
LunaLei
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/14/09 | Reply
Awww...I think she's pretty!
Actually I don't she looks like Hatsune that much.
Maybe the outfit has bits and such that're similar but the hair is like blue and Hatsune's was like greenish blue.
I like how you added the numbers in the bg. Adds a nice touch.
You did a fine job on this piece Sayoko-chan and it's one of my faves from ya.
Have a nice day~
IrrationalPrince
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/14/09 | Reply
...If they think this looks like luka wait till they see my oc... OTL
fft, if that blonde ponytail vocaloid can wear miku's uniform I don't see why star can't :d
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/14/09 | Reply
@mypharohloveless:
...Etto... This isn't Miku ^^; I know she looks a lot like her but still >_<; (Now i regret posting her OTL)
I do appreciate ur comment though. ^ ^
Um okies, but would u mind telling how the leg is weird? I would like to better learn my mistakes and get it right the next time. :3
Last edited by RSRKingdomStars at 3:31:56 PM EDT on June 14, 2009.
mypharohloveless
Otakuite | Posted 06/14/09 | Reply
It's really nice on a stand alone ... but on A Miku point of view ... it isn't, for one Miku isn't that busty, and the legs are sorta wierd the way they are drawn ... i'd be better if you made this Luka ... at least the body and hair would be right
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/14/09 | Reply
@innocent heart:
Haha, now that I look at it, she rly does look like luka a bit XD I made her b4 luka came out so i had no idea XD
Thank u for ur nice compliments X3 I tried to make her looks very adult in this pic, so I got what I intended X3
Ooh, I can't wait to see how ur vocaloid comes out~ X3 I bet she'll be a beautiful vocaloid~
*hugs*
innocent heart
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/14/09 | Reply
Aw what a cute Vocaloid! :D I love her outfit! She looks kind of like a mix of Miku and Luka. ^__^ I love her style though! Its hip-hoppish and has a sexy look to it! XD Lol. :)
Great vocaloid you have here Rachel! I should make a vocaloid too, sounds like a fun idea. :) Keep up the amazing work! ♥
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
@RSRKingdomStars:
Huhuhuhuhu yeah me saw XD .
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
@AngelBest Dream:
Oop I actually replied to that comment on the dragon pic XD Here, I'll copy and paste it on here for u:
oh nono, this isn't the art trade art, this is the dragon ive been working on b4 we did the trade XD sorry i wasn't clear on it ^^; I'm still working on the art trade dragon :3 btw, can the girl riding the dragon be the prsn on ur icon? XD
again, sorry i wasn't clear on it ^^;
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
Im very happy that you colored this one.I will finsih my part of the arttrad every soon,it´s just going very well .And how are u doin Reich ,seems you are really working on the commics .
I was very surprised how u finishes your art trade so fast lol.Well I wanted to do something like humm combining styles but it´s ok , seems it´s gona take a white to color my part XD.
Angel
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
@ChibiSasuke:
Yea I know XD I just loved Miku's outfit design and I wanted the hair to be parted like that XD
ChibiSasuke
13th Angel (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
Kawaii *A*
She reminds me a lot of Miku though D:
red kie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
wow your so great now !!! i love it
it is interesting to look back at ppls art and see how far we have come lols
i love the coloring and the praportions are perfect! and love the blue hair and back ground!
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
@:
Yeah, I like the third one too XD I wanted to keep her skin blank, but I haven't submitted a pic of her with her skin color so I just colored it in, so I added the WIP urls to show all of 'em XD
thank u Kara-chan >u< *hugs*
RSRKingdomStars
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
@moonlit dream:
Haha, don't worry I just made a small square of #'s and used the pattern bucket tool to make it appear throughout the whole page. ^^ If I did do it by hand, I'd be really proud of myslef XD *hugs*
khismylife
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
wow sayoko she looks amazing!
I really really love her hair! lolz her outfit looks great too. And I have to say that highlighter trick looks pretty neat! Look at you the little smarty figureing tha tone out. lolz
Great job with this one! ^^
moonlit dream
Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
:O
PRETTY.
Awesome job. The hair is amazing. xDD And I love the backgound. (Did you have to type all of those numbers?? D:)
mello159
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/13/09 | Reply
yah!
ur bac!