Well, that's exactly how my fanfiction'll go. It kinda makes sense. I might change it that she was born in London, lived one year in Chicago as her new house was built in Forks, and lived until she was 5 in Forks, then 17 in Phoenix.
Very cute x3
I like her multicolored eyes :D
*huggles*
((I did notice that Maria is a lot like Bella, though. :)
Just some advice, but you might want to change her a bit so people won't think she's too much like her <3))
Aw thank youuu~~~
sakura dancer
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
Well, that's exactly how my fanfiction'll go. It kinda makes sense. I might change it that she was born in London, lived one year in Chicago as her new house was built in Forks, and lived until she was 5 in Forks, then 17 in Phoenix.
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@sakura dancer:
oh, not much, just that Edward can't read her mind and how she was raised in forks/phoenix :)
That's all.
sakura dancer
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
@harvestmoonluvr:
How is she like Bella? I need to fix it.
harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/09 | Reply
Very cute x3
I like her multicolored eyes :D
*huggles*
((I did notice that Maria is a lot like Bella, though. :)
Just some advice, but you might want to change her a bit so people won't think she's too much like her <3))
Aw thank youuu~~~