Thank you Ice-chan, this looks great! ;U;
I can tell you've been working hard on your art, and keep it up!
I'll talk to you when I come back hiatus. ^^ *huggles*
EDIT: By the way, I LOVE that Riku remark. XDD
Last edited by Fire Fox Sakurie at 11:32:37 PM EDT on August 1, 2009.
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
Ah well for a quickie this actually came out quite nicely!! ^^ I love how you did the red lineart, it adds an interesting touch to the piccy ^^ The blush on her face is cute too! And it looks like you've got the colors down as well! You're getting better with lighting in every pic! So keep it going!
Constructive-wise..hm...not too much to say xD Maybe a thing or two~ her neck is quite thick...next time you should try making it thinner *nods* Her shoulders seem to lack joints at the top because they kind of look like they are about to disappear behind the front part of her body. Bring her arms up to the front more to make them more visible so you can draw them out more~ it's also a great way to practice with different poses as well ^^
That's pretty much it though~! I hope I could help ^^ Keep it going Ice-chan!<33
Fire Fox Sakurie
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
Thank you Ice-chan, this looks great! ;U;
I can tell you've been working hard on your art, and keep it up!
I'll talk to you when I come back hiatus. ^^ *huggles*
EDIT: By the way, I LOVE that Riku remark. XDD
Last edited by Fire Fox Sakurie at 11:32:37 PM EDT on August 1, 2009.
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Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
Ah well for a quickie this actually came out quite nicely!! ^^ I love how you did the red lineart, it adds an interesting touch to the piccy ^^ The blush on her face is cute too! And it looks like you've got the colors down as well! You're getting better with lighting in every pic! So keep it going!
Constructive-wise..hm...not too much to say xD Maybe a thing or two~ her neck is quite thick...next time you should try making it thinner *nods* Her shoulders seem to lack joints at the top because they kind of look like they are about to disappear behind the front part of her body. Bring her arms up to the front more to make them more visible so you can draw them out more~ it's also a great way to practice with different poses as well ^^
That's pretty much it though~! I hope I could help ^^ Keep it going Ice-chan!<33
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Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/01/09 | Reply
It looks great! ^^ I needa tell her happy b-day, too. >_<;