Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/09 | Reply
Oh wow, very interesting design going on here Dixie-chan! I love the color scheme~ really dark and very solemn. The expression too..it's really hard to decipher!
And whoa I just noticed the arm xD So cool as well!<3
Hm...and constructive critique-wise..there are just a few things to maybe look at.
The thickness of the neck is a bit better in this, which is great ^^ However the ear is quite a ways up on the face and should be a bit lower.(take a look at your face in the mirror and check what level it is on compared to the eyes)
Also try adding a bit more light to eyes to give ther person a bit of life. Even in the dark, there is always some sort of light.(whoa, that sounded really cliche xD)
And coming to the arm/bust, if you tried grasping your arm like that, you would probably hurt yourself lol. The bust should come in front of the right(our left) arm, and the hand should come around to grasp the arm. With the way it's drawn, it gives the illusion that the arm is really thin and out of proportion.
Aside from that, everything looks all good! You just keep on improving Dixie-chan! Keep it up!!<3
it's still in progress. It's one she just decided to start drawing, so so far she only has the cover completed, and she's working on the character designs.
She already finished sketching my character here : [link]
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/09 | Reply
Oh wow, very interesting design going on here Dixie-chan! I love the color scheme~ really dark and very solemn. The expression too..it's really hard to decipher!
And whoa I just noticed the arm xD So cool as well!<3
Hm...and constructive critique-wise..there are just a few things to maybe look at.
The thickness of the neck is a bit better in this, which is great ^^ However the ear is quite a ways up on the face and should be a bit lower.(take a look at your face in the mirror and check what level it is on compared to the eyes)
Also try adding a bit more light to eyes to give ther person a bit of life. Even in the dark, there is always some sort of light.(whoa, that sounded really cliche xD)
And coming to the arm/bust, if you tried grasping your arm like that, you would probably hurt yourself lol. The bust should come in front of the right(our left) arm, and the hand should come around to grasp the arm. With the way it's drawn, it gives the illusion that the arm is really thin and out of proportion.
Aside from that, everything looks all good! You just keep on improving Dixie-chan! Keep it up!!<3
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/09 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
it's still in progress. It's one she just decided to start drawing, so so far she only has the cover completed, and she's working on the character designs.
She already finished sketching my character here : [link]
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/07/09 | Reply
=D
hope she uploads her comic up soon
is it still in progess? or complete? O_o