lollol. has wanted to do a bloody picture for a while 8D and yes, i do hate criticism. but i figured, if i don't except criticism that could help me improve on my art, i would never get better. thus, the reason why i requested it.
Jeez, so bloody Dixie. Well, There's really not much criticism I can give you since the commenters below have already said it. BTW, I thought you hated criticism?
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Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
Love the pose and the expression! He seems like a really awesome character. :>
But if you insist on my constructive criticism ranting...well, here goes. Personally, I think that - unless he is supposed to have no muscle - his forearms should be fleshed out a little more. His hands also look too small in proportion to his head - a good tip is that a person's hand size should be about the distance from the base of your chin to the center of your forehead.
I could go too far and say that I wish the angles on his cheek and chin were more rounded, but from the looks of it, that's part of your style so it's okay.
Well, that's my tip from me! Good drawing overall! :D
Personally, I think you've got emotions down really well... just work on body proportions. Remember, bodies bend at the waist, and elbows should be 3/4 the way down the torso! ^_^
Keep it up! You're doing really well! I like the progress you're making! :D
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
@FFNaru134:
lollol.
has wanted to do a bloody picture for a while 8Dand yes, i do hate criticism. but i figured, if i don't except criticism that could help me improve on my art, i would never get better. thus, the reason why i requested it.FFNaru134
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
Jeez, so bloody Dixie. Well, There's really not much criticism I can give you since the commenters below have already said it. BTW, I thought you hated criticism?
Last edited by FFNaru134 at 10:34:04 AM EDT on September 27, 2009.
MissGoldenAngel
Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
Love the pose and the expression! He seems like a really awesome character. :>
But if you insist on my constructive criticism ranting...well, here goes. Personally, I think that - unless he is supposed to have no muscle - his forearms should be fleshed out a little more. His hands also look too small in proportion to his head - a good tip is that a person's hand size should be about the distance from the base of your chin to the center of your forehead.
I could go too far and say that I wish the angles on his cheek and chin were more rounded, but from the looks of it, that's part of your style so it's okay.
Well, that's my tip from me! Good drawing overall! :D
TheDarkAngel
Pathetic Diabetic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/26/09 | Reply
Personally, I think you've got emotions down really well... just work on body proportions. Remember, bodies bend at the waist, and elbows should be 3/4 the way down the torso! ^_^
Keep it up! You're doing really well! I like the progress you're making! :D
~Yosei~
And, then... I met you.