Your totally right and I screwed around with (because it looked really F'ed up) it till it was like this since I was too lazy to mess with it anymore. Maybe I'll give it another go when I color it.
The pose is great but something seems off about his shoulder and neck on his right(our left) side. It doesn't seem thick enough even though i believe it's going back behind him? :/ idk how to describe it, just seems a bit off. Maybe i'm crazy. OTL
The pose is very good and the movement very fluid.For some reason when I imagine this kind of picture I think it's a trouble to use all the bg if the character is not at a close view.Then you have to think of a background and sometimes it complicates a lot XD .
The Queen of Sweet (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
Thank you very much!
Well there's nothing to special as far drawing the line art but to get that crisp look after I've done the line art itself I go over some of the fading, broken, wiggly lines. Then I go over it again adding the thickness to some of the curves and such.
Yours Truly
The Queen of Sweet (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/09 | Reply
@AngelBest Dream:
Thank you!
I normally do a simple backgroud for my line art but I decided not to do that this time since I wanted the background to stand out. XD
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/14/09 | Reply
@Yours Truly:
Well it really stands by it's own,but I love the finished colored picture with that colorful background.
Angel
Yours Truly
The Queen of Sweet (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
@Kirobug:
;D SHOTA'S 4 LIFE (shot)
Your totally right and I screwed around with (because it looked really F'ed up) it till it was like this since I was too lazy to mess with it anymore. Maybe I'll give it another go when I color it.
Thank you your words are too kind!
Yours Truly
The Queen of Sweet (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
@AngelBest Dream:
Thanks a lot!
Yeah, it can be I decided not to throw a simple BG since I want the line art to stand out on its own.
Kirobug
SuperBum (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
SHOTA :U
CB iluvit
The pose is great but something seems off about his shoulder and neck on his right(our left) side. It doesn't seem thick enough even though i believe it's going back behind him? :/ idk how to describe it, just seems a bit off. Maybe i'm crazy. OTL
But other than that it looks great! X3
Yours Truly
The Queen of Sweet (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
@Summer Daydream:
Thank you!
Oh yeah, and he was questioning his own weight. Hells yeah BFF's for evar!
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
The pose is very good and the movement very fluid.For some reason when I imagine this kind of picture I think it's a trouble to use all the bg if the character is not at a close view.Then you have to think of a background and sometimes it complicates a lot XD .
Angel
xXMew MisakiXx
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
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I LIKE MAKING LONG COMENTS
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Otakuite+ | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
LOOK AT THIS CROWD CHEERING UR ART WORK
Summer Daydream
Mahou Shoujo (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
AHHH HE'S SO CUTEEE ~ <3
I remember when he met Oriibu over at TeMM and Apricot gave him rice or something.
BFFS RIGHT THAR.
I await the colored version 8D
xXMew MisakiXx
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
WATCH AS MY SQAUD WATCH U
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xXMew MisakiXx
Otakuite+ | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE
BUT,CUT,UT,GUT, IT LOOKS MORE LIKE A GIRL NO OFFENSE
BUT ITS STILL A BOY IN UR EYES
FEELS SLEEPY YAWN
Yours Truly
The Queen of Sweet (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
Thank you very much!
Well there's nothing to special as far drawing the line art but to get that crisp look after I've done the line art itself I go over some of the fading, broken, wiggly lines. Then I go over it again adding the thickness to some of the curves and such.
pilar
Impatient pizza (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
wow looks really amazing
can't wait to see the colored version
SojiRem
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/27/09 | Reply
Wow really cute! I love the position and everything :D hey how do you do your line arts btw? like how do you do the lines?