Hero of Thyme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
I agree with Avarice, your eyes are very shoujo and I absolutely love them.
However.
The hair... I see two things wrong. One would be that it looks like the hair starts to take a diagonal direction towards the top, and that kind of confuses me. Also the hair is very big. It kind of looks like you got very exctied to be drawing hair and just wanted to keep going with it. Don't. Keep the hair in proportion with the rest of the head. It's a shame I can't actually point out to you where the hair line should stop, but I'd say you have about an inch at the top that doesn't need to be there.
hikarimint
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
@i.luv.kiba:
thanks :D
i'm glad you like my eyes :D
and you too, Avarice ;3
thanks for the critique with the hair also, that's pretty helpful ;3
i.luv.kiba
Hero of Thyme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
I agree with Avarice, your eyes are very shoujo and I absolutely love them.
However.
The hair... I see two things wrong. One would be that it looks like the hair starts to take a diagonal direction towards the top, and that kind of confuses me. Also the hair is very big. It kind of looks like you got very exctied to be drawing hair and just wanted to keep going with it. Don't. Keep the hair in proportion with the rest of the head. It's a shame I can't actually point out to you where the hair line should stop, but I'd say you have about an inch at the top that doesn't need to be there.
Fix that and this will look better :)
~Colleen
Enslaving the world, one JRocker at a time.
AvariceTears
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
i really love how you draw eyes. The are so big and expressive!
-Avarice-