Otakuite+ | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
thank you both for the critiques, i'll continue working on both of those things ;3 and i'm not sure about the hair, but i'll try and fix it ^^ and anatomy is always my weakness, so it should be fixed eventually :3
Hero of Thyme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
Emphasis on Avarice's comment.
Also, as I said in my comment to your other art piece, the hair is going diagonal again. Why?
~Colleen
Enslaving the world, one JRocker at a time.
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
Very expressive eyes and face. But what happened with her arms? maybe you should have extended them a little further or not have drawn them at all.
For future refrence you should really try and look up anatomy or copy poses and apply them to your own style. A book on the sort may inspire you.
-Avarice-
hikarimint
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
thank you both for the critiques, i'll continue working on both of those things ;3
and i'm not sure about the hair, but i'll try and fix it ^^
and anatomy is always my weakness, so it should be fixed eventually :3
i.luv.kiba
Hero of Thyme (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
Emphasis on Avarice's comment.
Also, as I said in my comment to your other art piece, the hair is going diagonal again. Why?
~Colleen
Enslaving the world, one JRocker at a time.
Last edited by i.luv.kiba at 4:56:40 PM EDT on October 29, 2009.
AvariceTears
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/29/09 | Reply
Very expressive eyes and face. But what happened with her arms? maybe you should have extended them a little further or not have drawn them at all.
For future refrence you should really try and look up anatomy or copy poses and apply them to your own style. A book on the sort may inspire you.
-Avarice-