@aYaCHaN95:

Thank you so much for your honesty, I really appreciate it and don't worry through my life I have learned to take constructive criticism. Please when you can take a look at my other work. Tell me what you think. And tell me more abour that ovals you talked about.

One question; how much do u know about shading? I kind of suck at it, but I'm trying.

PLEASE HELP!!!

Hiya.! First of all, it's an honor to actually have my name used to your OC (even though it really isn't me. just the name. But, really, i lyk it when my name comes showing up randomly xD)
Honestly, I love ocs, and this is one of the arts I like.
she looks nice, i luv her haircut.! and the eyes, too
Really, i like it.
Here's the flaws though (please don't be angry.!)
Proportions. While her upper body looks fine, the waist - the lower part is kind of too small. It really doesn't go with the size...
And, while I really love her face, the distance of her eyes seems... far from each other.

So, there. I'm sorry if this kinda hurt you. I'm trying my best to not hurt anybody. I'm only trying to help. and, don't say it's ugly. It just needs a little fixing.
Here's a suggestion to fix that: try using ovals before putting the detail - you know, the ones artists do ( i'm not saying i'm one, just trying to describe. sorry again )
I know it will be hard at first, but i know you can do it. Hey, when I started that out, i really had a hard time, since i go detailing as first step. but when i tried this method, the proportions may not be as perfect, but they look better. if i can, i'm sure everybody can, too.!
I'm not forcing ya, just suggesting.!
Again, nice art. Really, and, I'm really really really really really sorry if my comment hurt you. and sorry also for the long comments. and my poor english grammar. Hehe.
That is all.! Keep up the good work.!

-aya_chan95

I love it! Keep up the great work!

I hate it. It is ugly. ~.~