Yeah orange and yellow would go great together ,sorry if the comment was a bit to much O_o .I always leave this kind of coment to Sakura and she seems to like them :3 .
Hope you re-plan the strategy Sakura,it's a very thought combo of colors,but I agree with everyone,you did a great work at them.
criticism is so hard to do. I always feel bad when i say something that could be considered mean. But, when i think about it, i know i really like those kinds of comments (as long as they aren't bashing). So comment on something i like, then make a suggestion. you'll get better if you practice. and you can practice on me, I'm really hard to offend.
yay wooshing is quite fun. I have a friend who did a lot of page design on our high school newspaper and our teacher was so old school. my friend would always try to step outta the box and make things look more modern and fun. Make things flow. She called it Whooshing! lol XD
im sorry about your computer =( you could probably get your hard drive out and try it in a different computer, or have it sent off (it you cant read it) and have all the files sent back to you. good luck. Id have to go back to art rage if i didnt have photoshop, no thank you i say! =]
Ohh okay.
That is true.
I never thought of it like that.
I just said that mine was a comment cause I wanted to do a critique, but I stink at criticism so I wanted to try and improve. but I saw nothing that I could critiqued on D:
Yesh, Orange and Yellow are a splendid combination. :3
Yeah, just make her hair more "WOOSSHHH" like! XD (In fact when your re-doing think "WOOOSSSHH") ROFL.
Ach! That must have sucked! I'm sorry. :( Hey at least your have photoshop. My computer died, no more ps magic for Creme.
yes, she asks "watasi kirei?" (am i beautiful) to people while in her mask and if they say yes she takes it off and asks again. If they saud no, she kills the men and does to girls what her husband did to her (according to one story anyway)
and comments are find. and compliments are critiques in themselves, i know what you liked so i can try it next time perhaps =] and criticism based critiques can show me what didn't work =]
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
I like the color combination as well
I fine it extremely difficult to find 3 colors to use,
and seeing how you put the colors green, yellow and black together I give you kudos!
:D
I also like how you made her face, especially her mouth.
Which has to be painful being slit ear to ear..
greta job!
keep it up!
I know its not much a critique DX
so just take it as a comment DX
Despite the comment below I think the color combination worked out fine. Even if they are odd colors to put together and may be the colors of something else.
This is very well drawn. I love her eyes and her expression. Her hair could use some work and the way it flows but that's all I see that' terribly off. :3
Very nice work. Keep it up.
Last edited by Creme Of Rolo at 7:57:17 PM EST on November 24, 2009.
Green is so hard to combine with yellow,and you still added black to the combination.Those 3 colors are really a nightmare to handle,even more with no white or other colors to break the combination.If you use these 3,you will just remember Jamaica colors with no chance to break the combo.And since you used green at the background the combination will look very weird.My advice next time is that if you want to use green and yellow,don't add black and add other colors to break the combination.Blue red and purple might help,also the addition of white to the picture.
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/29/09 | Reply
@crazydeth2:
thank you ^_^
crazydeth2
Otakuite++ | Posted 11/29/09 | Reply
my first thiught was: You are very beautiful!!!!!!! (Please dont kill me
) lol, its very well drawn and 
pretty, i love it!!!!!
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@Ryo or Demon:
thank you so much, it's one of my very favorite colors!! =]
Ryo or Demon
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
Wow, I love the green! ^^
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@AngelBest Dream:
thank you so much =] i will do my best!
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@Creme Of Rolo:
Yeah orange and yellow would go great together ,sorry if the comment was a bit to much O_o .I always leave this kind of coment to Sakura and she seems to like them :3 .
Hope you re-plan the strategy Sakura,it's a very thought combo of colors,but I agree with everyone,you did a great work at them.
Angel
KungPowChicken
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@SaturnSakura:
No problem :3
ohh okay.
:D thanks
I'll try my best!
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@KungPowChicken:
=] aww, thank you.
criticism is so hard to do. I always feel bad when i say something that could be considered mean. But, when i think about it, i know i really like those kinds of comments (as long as they aren't bashing). So comment on something i like, then make a suggestion. you'll get better if you practice. and you can practice on me, I'm really hard to offend.
^_^
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@Creme Of Rolo:
yay wooshing is quite fun. I have a friend who did a lot of page design on our high school newspaper and our teacher was so old school. my friend would always try to step outta the box and make things look more modern and fun. Make things flow. She called it Whooshing! lol XD
im sorry about your computer =( you could probably get your hard drive out and try it in a different computer, or have it sent off (it you cant read it) and have all the files sent back to you. good luck. Id have to go back to art rage if i didnt have photoshop, no thank you i say! =]
KungPowChicken
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@SaturnSakura:
oh wow.
one woman you never want to mess with DX
Ohh okay.
That is true.
I never thought of it like that.
I just said that mine was a comment cause I wanted to do a critique, but I stink at criticism so I wanted to try and improve. but I saw nothing that I could critiqued on D:
Creme Of Rolo
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@SaturnSakura:
Yesh, Orange and Yellow are a splendid combination. :3
Yeah, just make her hair more "WOOSSHHH" like! XD (In fact when your re-doing think "WOOOSSSHH") ROFL.
Ach! That must have sucked! I'm sorry. :( Hey at least your have photoshop. My computer died, no more ps magic for Creme.
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@KungPowChicken:
yes, she asks "watasi kirei?" (am i beautiful) to people while in her mask and if they say yes she takes it off and asks again. If they saud no, she kills the men and does to girls what her husband did to her (according to one story anyway)
and comments are find. and compliments are critiques in themselves, i know what you liked so i can try it next time perhaps =] and criticism based critiques can show me what didn't work =]
thank you for the help ^_^ i'm glad you like it.
KungPowChicken
Old Chicken Nugget (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
I like the color combination as well
I fine it extremely difficult to find 3 colors to use,
and seeing how you put the colors green, yellow and black together I give you kudos!
:D
I also like how you made her face, especially her mouth.
Which has to be painful being slit ear to ear..
greta job!
keep it up!
I know its not much a critique DX
so just take it as a comment DX
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@Creme Of Rolo:
thank you. I think i will try to rework this. Maybe go with orange on yellow? i'll have to play with colors and also fix her hair while im at it.
it was a photoshop nightmare lol i merged the layers without thought and id gone to far to step back and get my layers back. ooops =(
lol, we live we learn.
Creme Of Rolo
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
Despite the comment below I think the color combination worked out fine. Even if they are odd colors to put together and may be the colors of something else.
This is very well drawn. I love her eyes and her expression. Her hair could use some work and the way it flows but that's all I see that' terribly off. :3
Very nice work. Keep it up.
Last edited by Creme Of Rolo at 7:57:17 PM EST on November 24, 2009.
SaturnSakura
Pixie Bard (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
@AngelBest Dream:
i wasnt sure how to proceed. she is known for a yellow kimono and green is the easiest to put with yellow. i do know what you are saying though
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/24/09 | Reply
Green is so hard to combine with yellow,and you still added black to the combination.Those 3 colors are really a nightmare to handle,even more with no white or other colors to break the combination.If you use these 3,you will just remember Jamaica colors with no chance to break the combo.And since you used green at the background the combination will look very weird.My advice next time is that if you want to use green and yellow,don't add black and add other colors to break the combination.Blue red and purple might help,also the addition of white to the picture.
Angel