Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/18/10 | Reply
AGH ICE-CHAN. I'm so sooo sorry I didn't comment this earlier!! T__T I'm just getting around to comments now as a break for studying for my midterms and just...agh I'm so stressed now >.< Commenting on my friends' work helps me relax~ it's so nice to see work from you and see your characters!
I really like her design for some reason..it's very simple and fits in with the simplicity of Ben 10 ^^ I especially like how her hair is drawn in this one~ it seems you've added a bit more detail around there and around the eyes~! Her casual pose reflects how she is, as well. Alice is such a beautiful name choice for her design ^^
And critique-wise, I've gotta hand it to you Ice-chan, you've definitely gotten better! You should practice with some more waistup/full-body shots to help your anatomy skills~ on the bottom half as well *nods* (since you've gotten quite good at the top half ^^). The only thing I'd want to point out is that the torso is quite thick and that the shoulders seem like almost straight lines..perhaps add a bit more fluid movement to the muscles around the joints?
Otherwise, I think this is one of my favorites of all your OCs ^^ Keep it up Ice-chan!
XD Not really, it's just been a really long time since I've ever drawn her(and Izzy), and I thought I'd bring her back for good old times :'D
That kinda stuff happens to me with my older characters/characters that I haven't drawn in a long time sometimes XD
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/18/10 | Reply
AGH ICE-CHAN. I'm so sooo sorry I didn't comment this earlier!! T__T I'm just getting around to comments now as a break for studying for my midterms and just...agh I'm so stressed now >.< Commenting on my friends' work helps me relax~ it's so nice to see work from you and see your characters!
I really like her design for some reason..it's very simple and fits in with the simplicity of Ben 10 ^^ I especially like how her hair is drawn in this one~ it seems you've added a bit more detail around there and around the eyes~! Her casual pose reflects how she is, as well. Alice is such a beautiful name choice for her design ^^
And critique-wise, I've gotta hand it to you Ice-chan, you've definitely gotten better! You should practice with some more waistup/full-body shots to help your anatomy skills~ on the bottom half as well *nods* (since you've gotten quite good at the top half ^^). The only thing I'd want to point out is that the torso is quite thick and that the shoulders seem like almost straight lines..perhaps add a bit more fluid movement to the muscles around the joints?
Otherwise, I think this is one of my favorites of all your OCs ^^ Keep it up Ice-chan!
icefoxchan
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/27/09 | Reply
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XD Not really, it's just been a really long time since I've ever drawn her(and Izzy), and I thought I'd bring her back for good old times :'D
That kinda stuff happens to me with my older characters/characters that I haven't drawn in a long time sometimes XD