and yeah, I made a boo-boo, her eyes are supposed to be black. ^-^'
I tend to forget what I write sometimes....I'll fix it in the morning. I'm really glad that you like my story so far. I've down in the dumps about it lately.
Okay, I'll admit. This pairing actually comes second in my fave of your story. XD
They're not so bad really. Nice sun ray effect here. :)
Wait. Was this before or after Ame tried to run from him?
Because if it was after, shouldn't her eyes be like black? XD
LOL, I pay attention to the details. :3
Just so you know, since you asked if I've read your chapters and all, I actually saved a few onto a different document for me to read in my spare time. XD
It's really good, but it's the old one before you rewrote some parts. ^_^;
But I like this. Thanks for the dedication, too. ^_^
*Took another look* OMG. O_o Change Ame's eye color and make Korosu's hair a bit longer, I see my boyfriend and I... ^^;;
Last edited by smartanimegirl at 11:42:31 PM EST on January 14, 2010.
Poyongluv
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/09/10 | Reply
your story is awesome :D and i love ur picture amgsh
twilight luna
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/21/10 | Reply
Oh my gosh, this is so good! I absolutely love it.
VAVKgirl
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/15/10 | Reply
OMG THT IS TOTALLY HOT!
HametsuKuro
The Turning Tide (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/15/10 | Reply
@smartanimegirl:
lol that's hilarious!
and yeah, I made a boo-boo, her eyes are supposed to be black. ^-^'
I tend to forget what I write sometimes....I'll fix it in the morning. I'm really glad that you like my story so far. I've down in the dumps about it lately.
You made my day, thank you.
Kailith
Eternal Scout (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/15/10 | Reply
Awwzz so cute and pretty!!!
smartanimegirl
AngeliqueNade (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/14/10 | Reply
Okay, I'll admit. This pairing actually comes second in my fave of your story. XD
They're not so bad really. Nice sun ray effect here. :)
Wait. Was this before or after Ame tried to run from him?
Because if it was after, shouldn't her eyes be like black? XD
LOL, I pay attention to the details. :3
Just so you know, since you asked if I've read your chapters and all, I actually saved a few onto a different document for me to read in my spare time. XD
It's really good, but it's the old one before you rewrote some parts. ^_^;
But I like this. Thanks for the dedication, too. ^_^
*Took another look* OMG. O_o Change Ame's eye color and make Korosu's hair a bit longer, I see my boyfriend and I... ^^;;
Last edited by smartanimegirl at 11:42:31 PM EST on January 14, 2010.
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/14/10 | Reply
It's really pretty. ^^
cheriblosomchibi
Prince Hunny Bunny (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/14/10 | Reply
Nyahhhhh~!!!! It's really cute, I like it :D