Ah yes, drawing freehanded does do that xD But if you ever want to practice, setting up always is a nice thing to try ^^ You're so welcome, Dixie-chan! I'm just glad I can help you with my comments~! What are friends for huh? =P Love ya bunches!
I did think about making the shading darker, so that is definitely something I'll keep in mind for my next piece. the thing about the skull being thin makes sense. I'll try my best to keep that in mind, although sometimes I don't get the proportions right, for I draw everything freehand, lol. /practicepracticepractice/
thank you so much for your always helpful, supportive, and wonderful comments, aragorn-chan! Your criticism helps a great deal with my art.
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/18/10 | Reply
*nods* This is such an adorable piece, Dixie-chan!! ^^ I really love the pose and the expression on her face~ Selena is an adorable character!!<3 The purple star and butterflies also add a nice little touch and make her stand out too~! Haha this picture is just all-around fun~! And the effort shows~ ^^
Hm...not much to say critique-wise on this one xD If anything, you've gotten better ^^ Although I'd definitely try and put more contrast in your shading because it's difficult to tell where the shadows are. Your detailing is just fine and the pose is great ^^ Anatomy-wise, the head seems too thin...it should be a bit more full in relation to the skull(as in, the skull should be wider than the cheeks).
You're improving yet again my friend! Keep it up ^^
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/19/10 | Reply
@DixieWings:
Ah yes, drawing freehanded does do that xD But if you ever want to practice, setting up always is a nice thing to try ^^ You're so welcome, Dixie-chan! I'm just glad I can help you with my comments~! What are friends for huh? =P Love ya bunches!
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/19/10 | Reply
@aragorn1014:
I did think about making the shading darker, so that is definitely something I'll keep in mind for my next piece. the thing about the skull being thin makes sense. I'll try my best to keep that in mind, although sometimes I don't get the proportions right, for I draw everything freehand, lol. /practicepracticepractice/
thank you so much for your always helpful, supportive, and wonderful comments, aragorn-chan! Your criticism helps a great deal with my art.
aragorn1014
Little Sayu (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/18/10 | Reply
*nods* This is such an adorable piece, Dixie-chan!! ^^ I really love the pose and the expression on her face~ Selena is an adorable character!!<3 The purple star and butterflies also add a nice little touch and make her stand out too~! Haha this picture is just all-around fun~! And the effort shows~ ^^
Hm...not much to say critique-wise on this one xD If anything, you've gotten better ^^ Although I'd definitely try and put more contrast in your shading because it's difficult to tell where the shadows are. Your detailing is just fine and the pose is great ^^ Anatomy-wise, the head seems too thin...it should be a bit more full in relation to the skull(as in, the skull should be wider than the cheeks).
You're improving yet again my friend! Keep it up ^^