I don't really understand gijinkas, or whatever they are called, so much. Are they supposed to be animal people? Or pokemon as people? Or people with pokemon traits?
This being said I don't think I can critique this quite well. It's not really my forte for ...you know about the giant animal feet and ears. ha ha ha.
But one thing I do know how to do is critique on coloring and alignment, and shadow.
I think the coloring, you used colored pencil no? I don't think you showed off enough of the tans. You could have exaggerated the shadows around the ears and even in the hair. It didn't even have to be tan you could have used a light brown to dark brown, or even black. If you use a little of it you could tell it's shadow and it wont effect the colors at all, except for making them stand out better!
I feel that there IS a lack of detail in this picture. But I think it works ...for now.
I love the hand on the right. That angle is almost perfect. Maybe if you just arched his shoulder up just a little more than it would have been better. Because I'm getting this weird squished awkward arm position.
Sometimes when I'm looking at realism to draw and arms and what not. You can really use your own arm as a reference. Try posing in a mirror like you want your character to pose, it should really help. And if you can't remember it have someone take a picture so you can reference off it.
All in all, I think it's interesting and creative. This picture that is. Just try a little more on coloring. If you need any help just let me know.
When I first saw it I was like (O wow what is that thing!).Soon I finally after reading a bit recognized Kadabra as a pokemon .Hummm you even added a name,didn't saw that coming .
me: YESSS huge puffy tail XDDD....you know something? I've been stuck trying to find out what to write in Lux's not XP sooo if at the end sounds weird...don't blame me XD
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
So this is what he looks like ^^ he looks really cool Val. I like the detailing put onto him
His feet kinda bug me a little bit, but he's your character and he turned out great ^^
wolfpupable
Otakuite++ | Posted 05/19/10 | Reply
it took me a second to figure out what it is but it is stell awsome
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
@Yu Fang:
They are supposed to be pokemon as people so at the end the result is people with pokemon traits I think...
Well, thank you for all the advices, I would try and see what the result is ^^
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
I don't really understand gijinkas, or whatever they are called, so much. Are they supposed to be animal people? Or pokemon as people? Or people with pokemon traits?
This being said I don't think I can critique this quite well. It's not really my forte for ...you know about the giant animal feet and ears. ha ha ha.
But one thing I do know how to do is critique on coloring and alignment, and shadow.
I think the coloring, you used colored pencil no? I don't think you showed off enough of the tans. You could have exaggerated the shadows around the ears and even in the hair. It didn't even have to be tan you could have used a light brown to dark brown, or even black. If you use a little of it you could tell it's shadow and it wont effect the colors at all, except for making them stand out better!
I feel that there IS a lack of detail in this picture. But I think it works ...for now.
I love the hand on the right. That angle is almost perfect. Maybe if you just arched his shoulder up just a little more than it would have been better. Because I'm getting this weird squished awkward arm position.
Sometimes when I'm looking at realism to draw and arms and what not. You can really use your own arm as a reference. Try posing in a mirror like you want your character to pose, it should really help. And if you can't remember it have someone take a picture so you can reference off it.
All in all, I think it's interesting and creative. This picture that is. Just try a little more on coloring. If you need any help just let me know.
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
@vdr-07:
XD lol I warned you Val
Sara
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
That is the biggest tail EVER. I want to use it as a bean bag chair! Haha.
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
*goes and checks world* o___o ok you oficially win Dei!!!!! XD
Last edited by vdr-07 at 7:45:03 PM EST on February 9, 2010.
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
When I first saw it I was like (O wow what is that thing!).Soon I finally after reading a bit recognized Kadabra as a pokemon .Hummm you even added a name,didn't saw that coming .
Angel
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@vdr-07:
lol no seriously, just look at my world profiles and you'll see how many gijinkas I made ._.'
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
gijinkas are so much fun to make XDD haha I guess I'm suffering from the same desease xP
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@vdr-07:
lol well their the feet of a Kadabra :3
DX I have the disease of making gijinkas. I just made a Weavile named William
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@Team Plasma N:
Badrak: *ignores* did you say something?
me: YESSS huge puffy tail XDDD....you know something? I've been stuck trying to find out what to write in Lux's not XP sooo if at the end sounds weird...don't blame me XD
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@DeidaraNarutoClan:
yeah i know...his feet are weird lol...anyway Thank you Dei ^___^
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
So this is what he looks like ^^ he looks really cool Val. I like the detailing put onto him
His feet kinda bug me a little bit, but he's your character and he turned out great ^^
Team Plasma N
Sinbad of Sindria (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
Lux: Hey your butt is showing!!! >:P
Me: Haha his tail is huge nice work on it!!!
LGA775
Traditional Artist (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@dutch13:
Lol Yeah he kinda does huh..^^
Good things comes 2 those who wait, The things you lost will always replace something better..
dutch13
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
@LGA775:
this guy looks sly.
hon: welcome to the club boy.
me:hon got new freind. ^ ^
LGA775
Traditional Artist (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
Hehe Another Pokemon Human drawing..I love your style alot Kanae..Keep it up..Your awesome..^^Hugs
Good things comes 2 those who wait, The things you lost will always replace something better..