You know, I think you have a good idea of how to draw faces and eyes. I almost feel you used a reference for her face but then decided to free fall with her body. It all seems very stiff and the edged lines make her look like she is fuzzy and I know that LUM is not fuzzy, XD.
It works for her clothes but not on the skin. Skin is smooth and curves in, it doesn't rail out and scratch and point all over the place.
Another thing that i think you should work on is maybe the muscles on her stomach. I like them there but the lines are just too dark and thick. When you see someone with muscle, do you see a dark outline of it? No. You gotta be more relaxed and use a lighter pencil and then blend it in the skin.
Sara
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
For someone with so much muscle, she sure is skinny.
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
You know, I think you have a good idea of how to draw faces and eyes. I almost feel you used a reference for her face but then decided to free fall with her body. It all seems very stiff and the edged lines make her look like she is fuzzy and I know that LUM is not fuzzy, XD.
It works for her clothes but not on the skin. Skin is smooth and curves in, it doesn't rail out and scratch and point all over the place.
Another thing that i think you should work on is maybe the muscles on her stomach. I like them there but the lines are just too dark and thick. When you see someone with muscle, do you see a dark outline of it? No. You gotta be more relaxed and use a lighter pencil and then blend it in the skin.
All in all cute picture!