Wow the first comment is gonna make mine seem measly in comparison lol, but I will do what I can. I think the posters are a very cool idea. It's interesting how they are posing the exact same way as in the wanted poster itself. It's like, they are re-enacting it and making fun at themselves <3
Interesting concept. I wish you would have provided more information on your piece so i could properly critique it.
Either way I'll do what I can stating out what I like and what I dont like. Let me start out with what I like.
I think this picture is colored very nicely. I like the variety of colors and shadows. But I cant help but feel that is still lacking in the hair and on the man with the hats white shirt. Maybe some more creases would have worked nicer.
There are a lot of ups and downs to drawing group shots. One good thing about them is it allows the viewer to view all over the page without becoming bored and distant from it. But the bad thing, which I see here, is that they can be sometimes hard to align all together. The proportions aren't too bad just slightly there.
What I would have liked to see done differently is probably the background. The wanted poster idea was great. But I think it would have been better if you got a shot of everyone's faces and separated them into different posters. It would have just seemed non repetitive and lazy.
But don't get me wrong! I love this picture! You have a lot of talent and I cant wait to see more from you.
Spectrum Diamond
Otakuite++ | Posted 06/21/10 | Reply
Fai looks amazing. o8
Tohrushino
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
Cool! But is it just me, or does Sakura-neesama look kinda...masculine? - w -"
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
@lil sakura89:
you're welcome ^^
and thanks! XD yep its Lavi
lil sakura89
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
@vdr-07:
thank you! btw, that is a hawttt icon~ is that lavi? <3
vdr-07
Volcano Hamster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
hahah interesting idea..all of them look really COOL!!!!!
Sara
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
The fact that they match the poster kind of makes me laugh. But it looks good, overall.
LilGingerSweets
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
Ohhhhh niiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!!!! xD
I love your art, great job!
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
Wow the first comment is gonna make mine seem measly in comparison lol, but I will do what I can. I think the posters are a very cool idea. It's interesting how they are posing the exact same way as in the wanted poster itself. It's like, they are re-enacting it and making fun at themselves <3
xoxo
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
Interesting concept. I wish you would have provided more information on your piece so i could properly critique it.
Either way I'll do what I can stating out what I like and what I dont like. Let me start out with what I like.
I think this picture is colored very nicely. I like the variety of colors and shadows. But I cant help but feel that is still lacking in the hair and on the man with the hats white shirt. Maybe some more creases would have worked nicer.
There are a lot of ups and downs to drawing group shots. One good thing about them is it allows the viewer to view all over the page without becoming bored and distant from it. But the bad thing, which I see here, is that they can be sometimes hard to align all together. The proportions aren't too bad just slightly there.
What I would have liked to see done differently is probably the background. The wanted poster idea was great. But I think it would have been better if you got a shot of everyone's faces and separated them into different posters. It would have just seemed non repetitive and lazy.
But don't get me wrong! I love this picture! You have a lot of talent and I cant wait to see more from you.