On the Jazz! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/13/10 | Reply
I think it looks pretty good, the hair and shape of the face are excellent. As I think someone already said, there is something about the eyes. And I'm not quit sure what it is. The shapes and heights really do match up, I think it might be the reflection that's doing it. The reflection in each eye doesn't quit match up, I think that's what's doing it. But overall, an excellent drawing, and there really isn't anything wrong with it. Good job.
Dark Phoenix
On the Jazz! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/13/10 | Reply
I think it looks pretty good, the hair and shape of the face are excellent. As I think someone already said, there is something about the eyes. And I'm not quit sure what it is. The shapes and heights really do match up, I think it might be the reflection that's doing it. The reflection in each eye doesn't quit match up, I think that's what's doing it. But overall, an excellent drawing, and there really isn't anything wrong with it. Good job.
Schultzie
Getaway Driver (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
@Sara:
I noticed that too after I scanned it, Ill probably fix it and re-load it. Or if I can get around to do some lineart on it, Ill fix it there.
Thanks for the feedback.
Sara
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
His eyes look like they're drawn in two different styles.
Kastom
Otaku Princess | Posted 02/11/10 | Reply
"BANG!"
XP
I'd rather see in shades of gray.
ink.black.sky
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
This one is my favourite of the three you've uploaded. The emotion is really tangible. The expression is great!
noirassasin
Compulsive Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/10/10 | Reply
i definitely like this one. the expression, the hair. its well drawn. :3
[noir]
since i dont really draw im not sure i can give you good constructive criticism. :(