It looks very good, delicious I might say...
I'm no pro...but it would have been better if it was a little brighter.
the shadows are okay, but try not to exaggerate with them...let a little light pass through.
But I still like it the way it looks right now.
keep up the good work!

hugs + fav !

what i can say?
alltogether i really like it!!
BUT
..dont do crosses when you re shading..
like on the pear thing..i can see that on the shadow part u toned it vertically and horizontaly...

iT would be suited for a peace of wood some kind.but not a gentle pear..hmmm...

as my teacher said to us...you are still young and you havent found your drawing style yet..stick to the classic academic one..no crossing OR im gonna fail you in this class if u do it...

i love doing crosses on my drawings..gosh u can see them everywher...but when the talk goes to the still life and well academic drawing that is..i try to stick to the rules..lol..trained i guess..

also the dropping shadow should always be darker even if it feels and looks that its not so...

ok ok...

:)

i stop..

btw...

nice banana(s)...reaally looks edable and yum yum!
:)

hope you dont mind my...stupid critic or critique..how u spell it?

@Yu Fang:

lolzzzz.. haha.. hope to see you in da chat soon.. do come there often..

@RayMan87:

Ha ha ha, getting emo! Agh! No I'm happy! Look at the hearts in my eyes!! Just kidding, that would be disgusting. You are too sweet. Thank you.

@Yu Fang:

awwww man you're getting emo lol... its nuthin, i am always gonna look up to your artworks...

@Teapot Domescam:

Oh well, that sucks, ha ha ha. Wait. You go from saying yum to saying it wasn't fun! I'm confused here, ha ha ha. You're silly.

I'm really glad you like my shading. I don't think that people need to know how to describe in artistic terms to be able to know what's wrong and right. But thanks anyways. (sorry just trying to get feedback because my teacher just stares and walks away it's like, what's that supposed to mean?)

@RayMan87:

;__; you are too kind. Thank you for trying, it means a ton.

I really like the texture in the banana peel. Mmmm it reminds me of the banana that rotted in my backpack today >.> what a bummer. It was not fun AT ALL. I was kinda sad about that. But yeah, I'm not that great with shading, so I don't want to say anything about the picture without even knowing what I'm talking about!!

xoxo

@Yu Fang:

I am not a pro, its well done.. I see no flaws here...

@RayMan87:

You think so? Wow, thank you. Anything you see that needs improvement?

Your talent speak through this pic.