Nah it's okay, I understand how things get. I still haven't replied to you on DA yet because mannnnn I haven't even been on there. We had a long break from school and I don't like going on it at home, too much distractions and such. But yeah, where do you use the comp?
oooohh yeah side drawing is difficult.. i have now one before me ready to colo..and i m looking and thinking..gosh..they have too long bodies....cant fix that..would have to erase everything...
Thanks for the constructive comment, I agree about the shoulders of the man on the left, I actually struggled there a lot. But in the end, I just had to go with it. The profile.... that's a on and off thing for me, since my drawing style for profiles change now and then. Especially in digital, there's less control for the pen for me. But I accept your critique, the forehead is kinda close to the nose, I'll try to watch out for that next time. :)
Thanks! ^^
I just noticed the snakeboy look. Hm... I guess it's how his arms are contorted that way and the colors that bend along his outline. I still need to practice with drawing from sideways. That's my weakness. ;__; Thanks for the critique, keep em coming. ;)
Ah! I really gotta e-mail that Badou comic to you when you mentioned messenger. X__x The line at home is too slow, orz...
Erm, yeah, getting that kind of surprise would be nice... *sigh* ~__~
Before I start I would just love to say that I really like your coloring style. It isn't smooth or perfect but it still is enough to get it's own originality. I love the character that every line of color potrays.
Continuing on. I rather like this picture because of the action happening between the two characters. The man on the left seems to be more open about his love as to the man on the right seems a little more shy. I like how you were able to allow both characters to stand out like that.
I think your faces need a bit of work. Especially on the profile shots. Maybe you should try to make the nose not bring in so close to the forehead. Like...hmm, I do not know how to explain but, try not to make it so close.
Also, the angle on the man on the left seemed like you had a difficult time positioning his shoulders. It's okay, that angle is pretty hard to get!
All in all very nice work! Keep up this nice coloring style!
nice going with the colours..feels like autumn in there actually..all brownish and stuff.
little bit constructive critique...i think Prussias shoulders (both)should have been made more..wider?more bones..he looks kind of no bone...like a snakeboy...
but im still in love with the faces..the mood is just right
I am the opposite! I haven't been on DA, I've been stuck on here, commenting on people and what not. it's hard to go on DA when I'm not at school, it's not as chill at my house right now, so I just go on myspace and messenger the whole time >.>
Anyways, very cute picture. I like how he's hiding the flowers behind his back. SURPRISE!! That would be the best surprise ever, to get a really cute gift like that on valentine's day
Gadriann
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
@Teapot Domescam:
lol, it's okay, I also haven't commented to you on DA for some time now. ;___; Um, I log on at home though. I'm still on holiday.
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
@Gadriann:
Nah it's okay, I understand how things get. I still haven't replied to you on DA yet because mannnnn I haven't even been on there. We had a long break from school and I don't like going on it at home, too much distractions and such. But yeah, where do you use the comp?
xoxo
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
@Gadriann:
oooohh yeah side drawing is difficult.. i have now one before me ready to colo..and i m looking and thinking..gosh..they have too long bodies....cant fix that..would have to erase everything...
practice makes perfect!
:)
Gadriann
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
@Yu Fang:
Thanks for the constructive comment, I agree about the shoulders of the man on the left, I actually struggled there a lot. But in the end, I just had to go with it. The profile.... that's a on and off thing for me, since my drawing style for profiles change now and then. Especially in digital, there's less control for the pen for me. But I accept your critique, the forehead is kinda close to the nose, I'll try to watch out for that next time. :)
Thanks! ^^
Gadriann
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
@vampire kiss:
I just noticed the snakeboy look. Hm... I guess it's how his arms are contorted that way and the colors that bend along his outline. I still need to practice with drawing from sideways. That's my weakness. ;__; Thanks for the critique, keep em coming. ;)
Gadriann
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
@Teapot Domescam:
Ah! I really gotta e-mail that Badou comic to you when you mentioned messenger. X__x The line at home is too slow, orz...
Erm, yeah, getting that kind of surprise would be nice... *sigh* ~__~
Tamaki1991
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/16/10 | Reply
Ohh My ^^ I just love this pic and APH keep up the APH art amd I will fav. everyone of them ;)
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/16/10 | Reply
Before I start I would just love to say that I really like your coloring style. It isn't smooth or perfect but it still is enough to get it's own originality. I love the character that every line of color potrays.
Continuing on. I rather like this picture because of the action happening between the two characters. The man on the left seems to be more open about his love as to the man on the right seems a little more shy. I like how you were able to allow both characters to stand out like that.
I think your faces need a bit of work. Especially on the profile shots. Maybe you should try to make the nose not bring in so close to the forehead. Like...hmm, I do not know how to explain but, try not to make it so close.
Also, the angle on the man on the left seemed like you had a difficult time positioning his shoulders. It's okay, that angle is pretty hard to get!
All in all very nice work! Keep up this nice coloring style!
cassandra5322
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/15/10 | Reply
god that's cute. and hot. im weird.
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/15/10 | Reply
nice going with the colours..feels like autumn in there actually..all brownish and stuff.
little bit constructive critique...i think Prussias shoulders (both)should have been made more..wider?more bones..he looks kind of no bone...like a snakeboy...
but im still in love with the faces..the mood is just right
*kiss both
Sara
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/15/10 | Reply
I adore the blendy shading you use, and the warm colors you use it with.
twiliwolf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/15/10 | Reply
aw, thats cute ^_^, the background is slightly lacking but it still works. nice job!
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/15/10 | Reply
I am the opposite! I haven't been on DA, I've been stuck on here, commenting on people and what not. it's hard to go on DA when I'm not at school, it's not as chill at my house right now, so I just go on myspace and messenger the whole time >.>
Anyways, very cute picture. I like how he's hiding the flowers behind his back. SURPRISE!! That would be the best surprise ever, to get a really cute gift like that on valentine's day
xoxo
Herala12
Senior Otaku | Posted 02/15/10 | Reply
nice! i i luv your painting style!