Thanks for your remarks i will try to work harder for better proportions next time :) I really wanted to see critical commets like yours cause when I do a drawing, sometimes, especially when it took me a long time to finish, I do not admit my own 'mistakes' XD cheers ^^
I think the coloring looks very well done! You have colored the lines in directional lines that lead my eyes all the way down towards the sword. It is all pointing to the left hand corner which I find very interesting.
You really did a great job capturing the texture and shapes with colored pencil. It is quite admirable.
Proportion wise I do not see it as that great, especially on his face. Everything seems a little too squished and very small compared to his body. But that's just about it.
Very nice job! Your colored pencil skills rock my socks.
KinoFMA
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/23/10 | Reply
Woah! It rocks~! details are great
jorspi
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/19/10 | Reply
@Yu Fang:
Thanks for your remarks i will try to work harder for better proportions next time :) I really wanted to see critical commets like yours cause when I do a drawing, sometimes, especially when it took me a long time to finish, I do not admit my own 'mistakes' XD cheers ^^
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
I think the coloring looks very well done! You have colored the lines in directional lines that lead my eyes all the way down towards the sword. It is all pointing to the left hand corner which I find very interesting.
You really did a great job capturing the texture and shapes with colored pencil. It is quite admirable.
Proportion wise I do not see it as that great, especially on his face. Everything seems a little too squished and very small compared to his body. But that's just about it.
Very nice job! Your colored pencil skills rock my socks.
kita mikichi
Chibi Artist Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
Great shading! Absolutely love your coloring job. ^^
amandan
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
you drew him really cool lookin' i think it fits his character really good, and i can't get over your colouring pencil skillz 8D
foxfireburn
The Elusive (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/17/10 | Reply
the coloring is amazing!
as is the detail!