it really is, well to me. blech i kinda 'barfed' a few times of how shiny animu it is but it passes over eventually and you'll like the show more and pay a bit less attention to how desudesu they are
LMFAO
bbaahhh i haven't seen it yyyeeeeeetttt~!!! i was hoping that i could watch it today ;A; but yeah i heard about how they don't have the ares kids or clarisse(sp?) and blah blah but i still wanna see it myself
LOL same here. when i dont have my tablet i rarely even glance at my comp. If i wasn't a manga/anime artist my vision would probably be in a better state XD
Is that anime good? I started seeing it somewhat and it looked too anim-u to me /:o
duuuuude i saw the PJATO movie. have to admit i was lots disappointed. no chb t-shirts for crying out loud.
Last edited by xXxShiaxXx at 10:13:04 AM EST on February 21, 2010.
LOOOL XD
poor you, i know the feeling of being tablet-less it's like missing an arm. (not rly)
tell me about it. read Manga or watch Axis Powers Hetalia(an anime) if you already haven't~
if i still had my glasses and didn't lose them like the idiot i am, i would so do the nerd lisp and thank you for recognizing my genuine eyeballzderpthat can see all things awesometastic
but then again, this is over the internetz and i really DON'T have my glasses anymore
sob btw i recently got mah tablet taken away so i can't rp for a while until i get my art project done ;A; the internet is sooooo boring
facebook especially derpderp
ur not :).that's actually totally smart~ I always try to explore all kinds of styles too especially wen I'm bored. But anyways I'm definitely APP'ing, look forward to it ;)
SHIA BBY you definitely should join!!! apps are still open and its really fun :)(she's in genbu; green and turtle bahahaa, that's their trademark)
lol but either way i really do enjoy changes in my art it makes me feel more open to other things other than the average smiley happy people who can't express more than that
sssoooo i just though that its about time that if i want to become better i should draw things i that i wouldn't really do
Dude this is WAY sick <3
I love ur OC wish i could RP with her with one of my own, i'm getting lots of sweet ideas~(what group is she?) I love how she's so INSANE! esta totalmente vacano amiga, felicidades~
hahaha i see your point, most people strive for a perfect ten, but if they were to think about it,
once you've made it to that perfect 10...what now?
i guess it really is alright for an artist to truly not be 100% satisfied with their art, or else if you make it you have nothing else to do...
idk i'm just rambling on
i haven't been reading manga or watched any anime lately so i can see about the cheek,
but it kinda works with the pic since she's all 'bloody' it could help that she might have been beaten,
and i could've added may be some bruises to make it seem more like it and add more of the mood that's given off from the pic
hhhmmmm though the question is, what would i have done to make it a 10 out of 10 for you? C:
hhhmmmm, you do have a point on everything you've pointed out,
honestly, the whole thing was simply drawn for fun, it was never drawn seriously, but its really nice to have criticism on how i can make it better and i thank you for that
also it was for a song baton and the white background had comments from myself written on it originally so it also explains why its so bland
hmmm...the text thing ir really nice touch...
i dont think that there is anything wrong with the eyes..ive seen similar manga style and it looked just fine.
maybe the thing it the cheeck..it looks a bit swollen...ohh i had such problems myself..sometimes still do..so be free to tell me if u notice..my eyes have grown too used to my drawing style..:P
but then again..ive seen mangas with such cheek structures as well...oh ive probably read too much of them..lol
well alltogeher..7 out of 10
if u had given the skin a bit of a tone it would have been 8
:)
Uh, continuing on to this picture. I think that her eyes look cool! But I also feel that maybe they are too close together. You have to keep in mind that their is a third eye space that overlaps over your nose to space your eyes. I do love how you drew them but I think they would have looked a lot better spaced a part.
You have a very interesting, sloppy line style. It gives your art a very dark nervous tone. I feel that this most likely happened because of your stress.
The words look really great! I think the time you took on them really paid up for this. Good job on the creative side.
I do think that their is TOO much white. This being said I think it is too plain and makes it seem like it is unfinished. If she is supposed to be white than maybe you could have separated her skin tone from the background more.
Either way, you have a really awesome style! Keep up the beautiful awesome work!
I will have to look up that band sometime. They seem interesting. :P
Jimmy Page's Butt (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
whoa. if i had a tablet and got it taken away, i would scream so loud the world would disappear. and how the heck do you write your words so straight an neat? that's like impossible for me. i write like a 2 year old.
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
you should. It's cool but it definitely didn't remind me of the book at all, it was like a totally different version of PJATO or something.
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@xXxShiaxXx:
it really is, well to me. blech i kinda 'barfed' a few times of how shiny animu it is but it passes over eventually and you'll like the show more and pay a bit less attention to how desudesu they are
LMFAO
bbaahhh i haven't seen it yyyeeeeeetttt~!!! i was hoping that i could watch it today ;A; but yeah i heard about how they don't have the ares kids or clarisse(sp?) and blah blah but i still wanna see it myself
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@Jigoku Sakura:
LOL same here. when i dont have my tablet i rarely even glance at my comp. If i wasn't a manga/anime artist my vision would probably be in a better state XD
Is that anime good? I started seeing it somewhat and it looked too anim-u to me /:o
duuuuude i saw the PJATO movie. have to admit i was lots disappointed. no chb t-shirts for crying out loud.
Last edited by xXxShiaxXx at 10:13:04 AM EST on February 21, 2010.
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
@xXxShiaxXx:
oh man, my tablet is what makes my parents think that i'm a computerholic.
DUDE, THIS PAST WEEK AND A HALF I'VE BEEN WATCHING NOTHING BUT SHAKUGAN NO SHANA AND ALREADY I'M ON SEASON 2 EPISODE 12
that show is just amazing 'p'
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
LOOOL XD
poor you, i know the feeling of being tablet-less it's like missing an arm. (not rly)
tell me about it. read Manga or watch Axis Powers Hetalia(an anime) if you already haven't~
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
@xXxShiaxXx:
if i still had my glasses and didn't lose them like the idiot i am, i would so do the nerd lisp and thank you for recognizing my genuine eyeball
zderpthat can see all things awesometasticbut then again, this is over the internetz and i really DON'T have my glasses anymore
sob btw i recently got mah tablet taken away so i can't rp for a while until i get my art project done ;A; the internet is sooooo boring
facebook especially derpderp
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
@Jigoku Sakura:
ur not :).that's actually totally smart~ I always try to explore all kinds of styles too especially wen I'm bored. But anyways I'm definitely APP'ing, look forward to it ;)
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
@xXxShiaxXx:
SHIA BBY you definitely should join!!! apps are still open and its really fun :)(she's in genbu; green and turtle bahahaa, that's their trademark)
lol but either way i really do enjoy changes in my art it makes me feel more open to other things other than the average smiley happy people who can't express more than that
sssoooo i just though that its about time that if i want to become better i should draw things i that i wouldn't really do
:D fffff i'm talking to much
xXxShiaxXx
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
Dude this is WAY sick <3
I love ur OC wish i could RP with her with one of my own, i'm getting lots of sweet ideas~(what group is she?) I love how she's so INSANE! esta totalmente vacano amiga, felicidades~
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
@Jigoku Sakura:
its ok..i like rumble..i didnt even know it was a name...until i saw school rumble..anime..:P
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
@vampire kiss:
hahaha i see your point, most people strive for a perfect ten, but if they were to think about it,
once you've made it to that perfect 10...what now?
i guess it really is alright for an artist to truly not be 100% satisfied with their art, or else if you make it you have nothing else to do...
idk i'm just rambling on
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
@Jigoku Sakura:
ahh well..artist sees -art is!
:)
well i think i would never give anyone 10/10..couse then..wheres the place for development?improvement?
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
@vampire kiss:
i haven't been reading manga or watched any anime lately so i can see about the cheek,
but it kinda works with the pic since she's all 'bloody' it could help that she might have been beaten,
and i could've added may be some bruises to make it seem more like it and add more of the mood that's given off from the pic
hhhmmmm though the question is, what would i have done to make it a 10 out of 10 for you? C:
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
@Yu Fang:
hhhmmmm, you do have a point on everything you've pointed out,
honestly, the whole thing was simply drawn for fun, it was never drawn seriously, but its really nice to have criticism on how i can make it better and i thank you for that
also it was for a song baton and the white background had comments from myself written on it originally so it also explains why its so bland
Jigoku Sakura
sourpatch kid (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
@SakuraDust:
lmao thank you :)
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
hmmm...the text thing ir really nice touch...
i dont think that there is anything wrong with the eyes..ive seen similar manga style and it looked just fine.
maybe the thing it the cheeck..it looks a bit swollen...ohh i had such problems myself..sometimes still do..so be free to tell me if u notice..my eyes have grown too used to my drawing style..:P
but then again..ive seen mangas with such cheek structures as well...oh ive probably read too much of them..lol
well alltogeher..7 out of 10
if u had given the skin a bit of a tone it would have been 8
:)
forgive my critique...
please take it kindly,
v k
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
I have a tablet but I rarely use it.
Uh, continuing on to this picture. I think that her eyes look cool! But I also feel that maybe they are too close together. You have to keep in mind that their is a third eye space that overlaps over your nose to space your eyes. I do love how you drew them but I think they would have looked a lot better spaced a part.
You have a very interesting, sloppy line style. It gives your art a very dark nervous tone. I feel that this most likely happened because of your stress.
The words look really great! I think the time you took on them really paid up for this. Good job on the creative side.
I do think that their is TOO much white. This being said I think it is too plain and makes it seem like it is unfinished. If she is supposed to be white than maybe you could have separated her skin tone from the background more.
Either way, you have a really awesome style! Keep up the beautiful awesome work!
I will have to look up that band sometime. They seem interesting. :P
Sara
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
This is creepy, but kind of cool.
krow666
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
me gustó el concepto :D
SakuraDust
Moderator | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
Heterochromia never fails to be sexy <3
I love the design and her insane eyes.
miableachgirl
Jimmy Page's Butt (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/18/10 | Reply
whoa. if i had a tablet and got it taken away, i would scream so loud the world would disappear. and how the heck do you write your words so straight an neat? that's like impossible for me. i write like a 2 year old.