point taken...the arm does look awful..gwaahh..why are hands soo difficult?at 1st i thought i had put the thumb in the wrond place again...i used to make such mistakes ALL the time...lucky for me i had a friend who always told me to correct things..she did look at this pic and stuff but i guess was too worried of how i would feel and left the arm thing out this time.i think it should have been fine if i hadnt put the elbow visible..it should have been the other side of the arm..lol...buuut i noticed it toooooooo late..
the sword..gosh...theres another story..lol...half of it was done with pencil..the beggining and the end..well it kind of didnt fit in the paper i drew on...so i drew the other part on pc...my hand was shakey i guess..lol...point taken..:)
the tones...that is intereting ,i never thought about it...i guess i should buy other kind of pencils not just my HB mechanical one...
i will put my head in the next black and white pic i do...someday...:P
thankyou for lovely comment and very useful criique!
:)
That was totally not cool VK! ;_; I didn't want to know that yet. I'm still around where Shippuden leaves off before the filler. But I still love it though! Can't help it when it comes to your work, so awesome. <3
Can't wait to get to this part in the storyline! And I completely agree with Serpent. I've actually thought that since he decided to go to Orochimaru. Sasuke just needs a good beating and all will be right with the Naurto world. And I think a Kyuubi possessed Naruto should be the one to deliver it. Just so it can hurt that much more. =)
I do not think Sasuke looks serious enough to me. He seems more like he is just talking to him like a secret that a traveling stranger would tell. I do not feel that he is being so threatening even with that blade behind his back.
I do like the shading to an extent. I would have loved to have seen more darker shades because Sasuke's pants are black and you made them look like they could be a lighter blue or red. Do you know what I mean? Try experiencing with different tones and different types of pencils. I think they would help your pictures stand out a lot. In the blade itself I would have loved to see not such sloppy line around the edges. Since you brought it towards the center it makes it one of the main things you look at. The lighting could have also been nice around it. Usually when I draw a blade I like to just leave it mainly white and get a paper stump to shape and shade the sides just to give it that shine effect.
Also I am having a bit of a problem with Sasuke's arm and how it is positioned. I do not think it looks right. His elbow seems to be at a strange angle and a little awkward.
All in all, I love your artwork! It really speaks to me and I like pictures with emotion. I also really love how you made your characters connect with one another. They do not seem copy and pasted next to each other. Great work!
OMG...OMG...OMG!!!!!!!!!! What chapter is this one? I want to read it now, and this picture is sooooooooo good! I still envy your Kakashi skills, oh god how I envy them. I haven't forgot about your request though or aka challenge to me >.> He's just VERY hard, I don't know how you do it so easily. LOl but I ain't givin up just yet, so don't worry. XD Anyways, the bodies on this picture are fantastic, which is why I saved it to my favs. That anatomy is NOT amateur, let me tell you that much
SakuraDust
Moderator | Posted 05/21/10 | Reply
Beautiful work *____* It's interesting how it looks so perfect, even though it's supposed to be unbalanced, it just fits together. Amazing <3
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/22/10 | Reply
@DarkSapphire:
welll..yeah..i just hope none sensei will bet hurt during the process..:P
DarkSapphire
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
Whoa!!! & the story's only getting awesome-mer :P This
looks incredible its like a preview of whats 2 come.
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@Teapot Domescam:
gosh...there are soo many mistakes in there..i even wrote dying incorrectly..lol...but i must admit this was my best sasuke face i ever did..:P
soo yeah!
i m happy ppl like it...i guess staying up till 3 am was worth it
:)
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@vampire kiss:
Yeah it's still there, go and see for yourself. Yes! It is really that good. XD arent you happy XD
xoxo
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@Teapot Domescam:
it is??wow and i missed it....is it good to be there?
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@Yu Fang:
point taken...the arm does look awful..gwaahh..why are hands soo difficult?at 1st i thought i had put the thumb in the wrond place again...i used to make such mistakes ALL the time...lucky for me i had a friend who always told me to correct things..she did look at this pic and stuff but i guess was too worried of how i would feel and left the arm thing out this time.i think it should have been fine if i hadnt put the elbow visible..it should have been the other side of the arm..lol...buuut i noticed it toooooooo late..
the sword..gosh...theres another story..lol...half of it was done with pencil..the beggining and the end..well it kind of didnt fit in the paper i drew on...so i drew the other part on pc...my hand was shakey i guess..lol...point taken..:)
the tones...that is intereting ,i never thought about it...i guess i should buy other kind of pencils not just my HB mechanical one...
i will put my head in the next black and white pic i do...someday...:P
thankyou for lovely comment and very useful criique!
:)
v k
vampire kiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
@samgirl:
yaaay *hi five*
for da sexy kakashi that was....aaaand the rest of the comment..:P
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
CONGRATS!! THIS PICTURE IS THE 2ND ONE ON THE TOP!! YAY ME SO HAPPY FOR YOU XD
xoxo
yuukiii
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
wow
tht is totally awesome!!!
cant wait 4 the next chapter!!! sasuke is seriously losing his mind...hope naruto gets there in time!!!
VAVKgirl
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
AH! I can't wait for the nex chapter im scared for Kakashi!!!!
Dianote
Grand Otaku | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
What beautiful detail.
uzumakixhinata
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
you're really cool..Awesome sketch..^^
cassandra5322
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
mmmmm awesomeness, this looks great <:D
clueless101
Keyblade Master (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/21/10 | Reply
Well this fight was bound to happen and i'm guessing that Naruto's going to show up at the last second and Kakashi won't die...again.
If you want to be happy, be. ~Leo Tolstoy
samgirl
Senior Otaku | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
.....
*is silently fuming*
sauce-gay better not lay a hand on my kakashi or else...
lol. great artwork. :D kakashi looks so hot! <3
Knowmad
Scarecrow (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
That was totally not cool VK! ;_; I didn't want to know that yet. I'm still around where Shippuden leaves off before the filler. But I still love it though! Can't help it when it comes to your work, so awesome. <3
Can't wait to get to this part in the storyline! And I completely agree with Serpent. I've actually thought that since he decided to go to Orochimaru. Sasuke just needs a good beating and all will be right with the Naurto world. And I think a Kyuubi possessed Naruto should be the one to deliver it. Just so it can hurt that much more. =)
SolemnSerpent
Cupcake Constable (Moderator) | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
Sasuke needs a good a**-kicking, and then everything will be alright.
This is great, the shading is lovely, and I adore the way you draw them both. <3
Yu Fang
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
I really like this picture. Sasuke is cool.
I do not think Sasuke looks serious enough to me. He seems more like he is just talking to him like a secret that a traveling stranger would tell. I do not feel that he is being so threatening even with that blade behind his back.
I do like the shading to an extent. I would have loved to have seen more darker shades because Sasuke's pants are black and you made them look like they could be a lighter blue or red. Do you know what I mean? Try experiencing with different tones and different types of pencils. I think they would help your pictures stand out a lot. In the blade itself I would have loved to see not such sloppy line around the edges. Since you brought it towards the center it makes it one of the main things you look at. The lighting could have also been nice around it. Usually when I draw a blade I like to just leave it mainly white and get a paper stump to shape and shade the sides just to give it that shine effect.
Also I am having a bit of a problem with Sasuke's arm and how it is positioned. I do not think it looks right. His elbow seems to be at a strange angle and a little awkward.
All in all, I love your artwork! It really speaks to me and I like pictures with emotion. I also really love how you made your characters connect with one another. They do not seem copy and pasted next to each other. Great work!
Teapot Domescam
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
OMG...OMG...OMG!!!!!!!!!! What chapter is this one? I want to read it now, and this picture is sooooooooo good! I still envy your Kakashi skills, oh god how I envy them. I haven't forgot about your request though or aka challenge to me >.> He's just VERY hard, I don't know how you do it so easily. LOl but I ain't givin up just yet, so don't worry. XD Anyways, the bodies on this picture are fantastic, which is why I saved it to my favs. That anatomy is NOT amateur, let me tell you that much
xoxo
sasoriofredsand
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/20/10 | Reply
I wrote about the new chapter of naruto in my world, it is getting to be really amazing!