I see improvement! :,D Great job on the poses, especially on Leah's. :) The wrinkles on the jacket she's hold ing is pretty good too. :)
I think you should make Leah's right arm a little less muscular since she's a girl, however.
Also, put some more wrinkles in spots where joints bend. (Like where Rageon's arm bends. Sorry if that's confusing. xD;)
Nice work, though! I'd be really interested in seeing a colored version. ;D
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Supreme Individual (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/14/10 | Reply
I see improvement! :,D Great job on the poses, especially on Leah's. :) The wrinkles on the jacket she's hold ing is pretty good too. :)
I think you should make Leah's right arm a little less muscular since she's a girl, however.
Also, put some more wrinkles in spots where joints bend. (Like where Rageon's arm bends. Sorry if that's confusing. xD;)
Nice work, though! I'd be really interested in seeing a colored version. ;D