There's not much I can help with criticism-wise since I'm not an experienced artist at all (in my opinion), so I can't spot anything wrong, or any flaws. I guess that would be a good thing though, for it all looks amazing and absolutely wonderful to me! great job on it I like how it's peaceful and serene and yet there is also a hint of darkness in it, kind of what the series D.Gray-Man represents. I think it's good enough to ink and color as it is Choco~~~~ XDDD