so, again, your faces has improved drastically
(my spelling's starting to go bad, so the following comments might require some brain power to read at certain times lol)
so about this one
you shouldnt be doodling during school time =__=
you should be paying attention to the teacher lmfho
but that aside. lets pretend you had all the time in the world to draw this, and this is a finished work rather than a sketch or something k?
the body is slightly weird
it looks as if she's wearing her bf's oversized shirt. except that her upper body portion is too long
or rather, it's too long in respect to the length of her legs (p.s. her left(?) leg doesnt have a feet attached.. and the opening to the pants there is too small to have hidden a feet)
so i think this is what made her seem more like a guy than a girl: the fact that her body is too long in relationship to the rest
and that the arms (especally the front-ish one) is too thick
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/04/10 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
does it help that I still payed attention to the teacher? >: lawl
okay, thanks for that critic! That definitely hits the major points on this. x'D
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/04/10 | Reply
so, again, your faces has improved drastically
(my spelling's starting to go bad, so the following comments might require some brain power to read at certain times lol)
so about this one
you shouldnt be doodling during school time =__=
you should be paying attention to the teacher lmfho
but that aside. lets pretend you had all the time in the world to draw this, and this is a finished work rather than a sketch or something k?
the body is slightly weird
it looks as if she's wearing her bf's oversized shirt. except that her upper body portion is too long
or rather, it's too long in respect to the length of her legs (p.s. her left(?) leg doesnt have a feet attached.. and the opening to the pants there is too small to have hidden a feet)
so i think this is what made her seem more like a guy than a girl: the fact that her body is too long in relationship to the rest
and that the arms (especally the front-ish one) is too thick
=]
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/26/10 | Reply
@Otakupop89:
that's okay; nothing to apologize for X]
Otakupop89
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/26/10 | Reply
I'm sorry, I didn't realize it was a girl
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/25/10 | Reply
@Otakupop89:
'she' this time and thank you!! X]
Otakupop89
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/25/10 | Reply
Wow he looks awesome
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/16/10 | Reply
@otakufangirl:
Thank you so much for saying so, otakufangirl !! X]
<3
otakufangirl
Otaku Eternal | Posted 05/16/10 | Reply
Cuteeeee~
I love the ears and hair :3
Great job! You've been improving so much lately, keep up the good work!