LOL uhh yeah ... drawing girls -ulterior motive :D.
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and OMG O.O i could've drawn water drops on her didn't come to my mind ....DAMN....thnx for the suggestion next time if i BIKINI'D OUT [Epic word XD] someone i'd be sure to to have water drops on her!!
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tanks for the critique!! :]
Last edited by Carbon Ace at 3:50:16 AM CDT on October 2, 2010.
Saw you wanted some critique.
Well....there is everything wrong with this, and thats not a bad thing.
So one thing I do notice, her body,legs, and arms are too long. Also I dont think you intended to make everything but her boobs and face look like a guys, but it does. I'm sorry.
So if your having trouble I would go and look at different pictures of real life models(girls) not nessicarilly a super model just people in general and try to draw what you see. Notice how their torsos arent so long, notice how their legs are, some are long, some are short, some have more pointed knees, etc...
Also look at arms, the bend of your arm should be where you waist is and your hand, the tips of your fingers, should end about mid thigh.
Ok, what do I see good in the pic?
Well personally her boobs, neck, and face are in proportion, that took me years to finally get right. So keep that up. Your hands are also very good.
So to sum it all up. Just look at real life people to get a good idea for proportion, and look at other artists work, you have your own style, so dont try to copy, but referncing is something every artist uses. And dont freak out if you notice your style changing as you find whats comfortable for you.
I know in my work I still draw torsos slightly longer than normal, also with my legs, but when I do it I keep the proportion to it. It just depends on what your style is.
*laughs* Ah half naked people. Again you have graced my screen. *sigh* Oh how I have not missed you...
anyway-
I think where her rips would be, and where her stomach starts looks a tad bit off. She looks almost too think right at the ''joint'' there compared to the ribcage. Although I have to commend you for drawing that is, as in most drawing that is ushally missed or dropped. I think if you thinded the ribcage out or thicked the stomach right below it it might look better.
Also, and this is purely subjective her... *looks at hands* Left arm, the right on the page, look a tab bit to wide. Right before the elbow it seemes to flair out too much in contrast to the other arm. Although that might be becuase its bent. I'm not sure. *laughs* I'm really not the best artist.
I have to say that this does look really good. I think you said you drew it around three months ago? It looks good for that kind of time span. I like her pose; and the cloths- or lack of? You're really talented at drawing- and the general anatomy looks good.
Oh and you also asked about the hair yes? I can't say much on that, it looks good. Like uhhhh... the guy??? before me said some shine would look great. And since shes all bikini'd out (NEW WORD) you could throw on some water effects. But I don't know if that was your intention or not. Looks pretty good though becuase it lies really well aganst her face. Just some highlights here and there woudl really spruce it up.
Oh dear, I seem to have ranted on again. So sorry that this will be so long! But I really love this drawing. YOU DID SO WELL!!! *grins*
Cool :3 You did a nice job coloring the skin, and the transparent effect on her wrap is very nice. I think the hair looks like it should be a little shinier, as it looks kinda flat the way it is. I luffles the texture on the towel. Anatomy-wise it's mostly pretty good, but it looks like you got a little carried away with the stomach, and like the torse should be a bit longer.
Overall, it looks pretty good. Keep up the great work. ^.^
kisskiss-bangbang
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/02/10 | Reply
@Carbon Frost:
Tsk Tsk Mr Carbon Ace- ulterior motives ALREADY!! XD
Er well- you don't *have* too mate! I just said that because usaly people in BIKINIS are like. swimming. in water. or some sort of liqiud. Hopefuly.
ANYWAY- YOUR WELCOME I HOPE I HELPED
matt
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/02/10 | Reply
@:
7 HEADS RULE ....... (9_9)ah those old days when "THEY" taught us XD.......
tanks for taking the time to critique... i really appreciate it !! :]
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/02/10 | Reply
@zero guardian:
thanku for taking the time to critique ... :]!!
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/02/10 | Reply
@kisskiss-bangbang:
LOL uhh yeah ... drawing girls -ulterior motive :D.
..
and OMG O.O i could've drawn water drops on her didn't come to my mind ....DAMN....thnx for the suggestion next time if i BIKINI'D OUT [Epic word XD] someone i'd be sure to to have water drops on her!!
....
tanks for the critique!! :]
Last edited by Carbon Ace at 3:50:16 AM CDT on October 2, 2010.
zero guardian
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/29/10 | Reply
Hey love,
Saw you wanted some critique.
Well....there is everything wrong with this, and thats not a bad thing.
So one thing I do notice, her body,legs, and arms are too long. Also I dont think you intended to make everything but her boobs and face look like a guys, but it does. I'm sorry.
So if your having trouble I would go and look at different pictures of real life models(girls) not nessicarilly a super model just people in general and try to draw what you see. Notice how their torsos arent so long, notice how their legs are, some are long, some are short, some have more pointed knees, etc...
Also look at arms, the bend of your arm should be where you waist is and your hand, the tips of your fingers, should end about mid thigh.
Ok, what do I see good in the pic?
Well personally her boobs, neck, and face are in proportion, that took me years to finally get right. So keep that up. Your hands are also very good.
So to sum it all up. Just look at real life people to get a good idea for proportion, and look at other artists work, you have your own style, so dont try to copy, but referncing is something every artist uses. And dont freak out if you notice your style changing as you find whats comfortable for you.
I know in my work I still draw torsos slightly longer than normal, also with my legs, but when I do it I keep the proportion to it. It just depends on what your style is.
Hope this helps
Zero-Chan
kisskiss-bangbang
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/29/10 | Reply
*laughs* Ah half naked people. Again you have graced my screen. *sigh* Oh how I have not missed you...
anyway-
I think where her rips would be, and where her stomach starts looks a tad bit off. She looks almost too think right at the ''joint'' there compared to the ribcage. Although I have to commend you for drawing that is, as in most drawing that is ushally missed or dropped. I think if you thinded the ribcage out or thicked the stomach right below it it might look better.
Also, and this is purely subjective her... *looks at hands* Left arm, the right on the page, look a tab bit to wide. Right before the elbow it seemes to flair out too much in contrast to the other arm. Although that might be becuase its bent. I'm not sure. *laughs* I'm really not the best artist.
I have to say that this does look really good. I think you said you drew it around three months ago? It looks good for that kind of time span. I like her pose; and the cloths- or lack of? You're really talented at drawing- and the general anatomy looks good.
Oh and you also asked about the hair yes? I can't say much on that, it looks good. Like uhhhh... the guy??? before me said some shine would look great. And since shes all bikini'd out (NEW WORD) you could throw on some water effects. But I don't know if that was your intention or not. Looks pretty good though becuase it lies really well aganst her face. Just some highlights here and there woudl really spruce it up.
Oh dear, I seem to have ranted on again. So sorry that this will be so long! But I really love this drawing. YOU DID SO WELL!!! *grins*
Cheers mate!!
Matt Tsuki
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/04/10 | Reply
@ferret-x:
thnx!!..... and yeah i actually don't know how to color hair so i'll try looking up some tuts .. :3
Last edited by Carbon Ace at 1:34:25 AM CDT on June 4, 2010.
ferret-x
Otakuite+ | Posted 06/04/10 | Reply
Cool :3 You did a nice job coloring the skin, and the transparent effect on her wrap is very nice. I think the hair looks like it should be a little shinier, as it looks kinda flat the way it is. I luffles the texture on the towel. Anatomy-wise it's mostly pretty good, but it looks like you got a little carried away with the stomach, and like the torse should be a bit longer.
Overall, it looks pretty good. Keep up the great work. ^.^