:D everyone has said enough already :D...... so i'll just be myself and say good job on hair as they look near to real !! and the band type of thing shes wearing on her ankle is kinda cute :p [honestly]

@kisskiss-bangbang:

I'll let ya know when I finish

@kisskiss-bangbang:

i thought friends were only made for that purpose. huh. yay i learned something new today lmao

well im glad my comment was a short one in comparison.... but jesus christ D: long comments scare me XD u think someone could write a novel only using comments from this site? thatd actually be really awesome.....

@kisskiss-bangbang:

I'll have to work on it tomororw :D

i love the soft feel of the picture very simple and plain

you have no idea..i actually cried when paraguay beat japan..and i just couldnt get over it. my sister had to yell at me >.>
but i think japan tried harder than paraguay..and if it werent for that one guy missing i bet they would have won..meh. when did they beat spain?

hi, u don't know me, but id love to know you. so while being creepy and looking at my subby updates i saw this in vacuumology's world (yay) and thought "yes, lets be creepy, liz!"

uhm, its late so i didnt read any of the other comments so if im repetitive im sorry :c even if i did read it. (this probably doesnt make sense either so sorry in advance :C)

for the feet/leg, the angle seems a bit off, it looks as if she were walking at a side view in a straight line through the page, but her body looks like its walking away from the viewer. i think we should be seeing the back of her knees/ legs, and if u need help on the angle, id recomend taking a photo of some sort of the pose in the picture and use it as references (cus idk if u use a manequin but they prove to be unreliable especially if u love to mess with the parts and u dont know wut is front or back anymore sorry im rambling hurgh).

and also just for reference, the knees are a bit too pointy, should try to make them softer and smoother and rounder.

the top part of the body looks pretty good, though! for me thats the HARDEST part when trying to draw a figure with it sback turned, so yay for accomplishing it c:

okay i guess ill go before i start rambling on and on and on again because im pretty sure thatd be extremely tedious to read

toodlaloo c:

Hey!
Saw you wanted critique.
Well her feet and legs I would maybe practice the pose a bit so that way it looks like she is turning atound to look at someone.
I was actually looking at another drawing with this pose and was going to try it, if I do I'll dedicate the piece to you to maybe show how to get the legs to look.

Coloring I like, the flag I think just practice. I am not sure how to do that either.

I was really confused, Spain won the world cup, didn't they? (unless we are talking about a completely diferent thing here). So they beat Paraguay (and Germany).
I'm confusing myself here, nevermind...

Now on to the critique (I'm trying to go with what you asked in the CU world).

For the flag, I'm not sure how she is holding it, and the way of the fold depends a lot on that, but it seems that you have it pretty well drawn here. However, if there is wind blowing it that way, it is rather confusing since nothing else seems to flow with it --and she is not moving. If she is standing still, the flag would not be blowing, unless there is wind. If she is walking, the flag would be blowing a bit too, depending on the direction of the walk. (hopefully that was not too confusing)
As for the feet, they have to match her pose. The knees are showing too much, suggesting that part of the face should be shown, because it seems she is facing sideways. So for what you were trying to do, it would be good to show the back of the knees more (since her body is facing away from the viewer), but not completely forgetting that there is a round knee that will slightly show. Sorry, that was way rambly (I'm bad at explanation, but hopefully this helped).
Then for her feet, you would probably see more of her heel than anything, and the toes would probably not show (I'm sorry, I'm not too good with feet either). The position of the feet is a little iffy, unless she is standing on her tippy-toes, otherwise they should be flat.

Anyway.
I really like how you texturized the hair, and the simplicity of the coloring is really nice and goes well with the girl walking away.