Well, the thumb is wrapped around strangely, like the thumb should have a bulge with a line, I don't think the colouring would fix the 3D-ness...or will it....O.o
Aww...I see, yeah, the clothing messes stuff up sometimes...>.>
Haha, yeahhh, I would comment with longer comments, but I usually don't know what to say...^ ^; That and I'm trying to talk less...>.> I have a habit of rambling...TT^TT
yeah i was trying to make the body look like it was at an angle .__.''
i was hoping i could make the thumb look less flat once i colore it
the arm was actually fine untill i added the clothing....>.>;;
thank you for the comment...longest one to date i think
O___O Kick butt character! The original hair and clothing are duly noted, not to mention his face. You did a great job on the perspective, and I have to say that the "fist pump in the air" really suits the atmosphere of this picture. Look out Sasuke (or some other character with fan girls), number 64 is stealing your fan girls (I'm not a fan girl >.>) o-o!!
Wakusei Aoshi
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/30/10 | Reply
@Spirt of water:
Haha, well, I usually don't go off topic when I ramble...I just keep talking about the same thing and thinking about it...O.o
Spirt of water
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/30/10 | Reply
@Wakusei Aoshi:
dw i tend to ramble too o.o;;
i try not since it tends to go off topic.....
Wakusei Aoshi
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/30/10 | Reply
@Spirt of water:
Well, the thumb is wrapped around strangely, like the thumb should have a bulge with a line, I don't think the colouring would fix the 3D-ness...or will it....O.o
Aww...I see, yeah, the clothing messes stuff up sometimes...>.>
Haha, yeahhh, I would comment with longer comments, but I usually don't know what to say...^ ^; That and I'm trying to talk less...>.> I have a habit of rambling...TT^TT
Spirt of water
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/30/10 | Reply
@Wakusei Aoshi:
yeah i was trying to make the body look like it was at an angle .__.''
i was hoping i could make the thumb look less flat once i colore it
the arm was actually fine untill i added the clothing....>.>;;
thank you for the comment...longest one to date i think
Wakusei Aoshi
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/30/10 | Reply
I don't think it's perspective fail! It looks really good, and the lineart is sooo clean! O.O Just a few things:
The arm in the air isn't going down into the right socket, or it doesn't seem that way...maybe move it up a bit.
And in the picture her foot was kinda lined up with her fist, of course her body was kinda twisted, I don't know if you wanted to do that or not...
The thumb fist isn't very 3-D, maybe make it pop out more or look at your own fist and see how the thumb looks.
I don't know how much like the reference picture you want it, though, but I say it looks pretty good besides those little things.
I like the design! Looks really awesome! >:D
ladytsunade
Otakuite | Posted 07/24/10 | Reply
O___O Kick butt character! The original hair and clothing are duly noted, not to mention his face. You did a great job on the perspective, and I have to say that the "fist pump in the air" really suits the atmosphere of this picture. Look out Sasuke (or some other character with fan girls), number 64 is stealing your fan girls (I'm not a fan girl >.>) o-o!!