The colors [and specific design] are what make the uniform distinct from others, otherwise it could just be from anything. I hope you understand. But you don't need to worry about the shades of blue you use too much; I just wanted to point it out to you.
Thank you for your submission.
Many colors are wrong on the outfit. First, the bow is a light blue color. The badge should be in between; it should be lighter than the waistband on the skirt and dark than that of the bow.
There are two buttons on each side of the sleeve. Lastly, the shoes come in a choice of black or white.
These are very specific critiques, and it is not necessary that they be clearly portrayed in future drawings, but I would just like to point them out to you for this first time. For future reference, please use this guide.
Overall, good job. I like the hair and it came out looking very cute. In order for you to gain experience in drawing, I would suggest not using too many bases.
I hope this comment helps. Thank you again for your submission.
saekimidori
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply
@sunrisecaster:
The colors [and specific design] are what make the uniform distinct from others, otherwise it could just be from anything. I hope you understand. But you don't need to worry about the shades of blue you use too much; I just wanted to point it out to you.
sunrisecaster
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@saekimidori:
Im...sorry. I didn't realize that the colors mattered so much....Ill just make up the two points later.
saekimidori
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/22/10 | Reply
Thank you for your submission.
Many colors are wrong on the outfit. First, the bow is a light blue color. The badge should be in between; it should be lighter than the waistband on the skirt and dark than that of the bow.
There are two buttons on each side of the sleeve. Lastly, the shoes come in a choice of black or white.
These are very specific critiques, and it is not necessary that they be clearly portrayed in future drawings, but I would just like to point them out to you for this first time. For future reference, please use this guide.
Overall, good job. I like the hair and it came out looking very cute. In order for you to gain experience in drawing, I would suggest not using too many bases.
I hope this comment helps. Thank you again for your submission.