I love the shading and all the details! It looks so pretty! I like it the way it is with only the balloons coloured! :D
I see a problem with the legs. The one in the front looks skinnier than the one in the back...which...shouldn't be...O.o So maybe if you make the front one a bit thicker than that'd fix the problem!
Dunno if anybody else said the same thing, though...I didn't read ALL of the comments...Oh, yes I did...XD
YESS!!!
you're the only one who noticed
yeah, i was grossly influenced by her stuff
cuz i wanted something cute
so i browsed through her gallery
and picked up a few tricks XD
Aww! Shes really cute :) You are good. Reminds me of hellobaby's art from off of deviant art. My only thing is from the knee down looks a bit short to me and maybe add a simple background. :) Good luck, its going to turn out great ^-^
It's really cute so far. Maybe add a horizon, a bit of a background? With the images in the forefront, the background really stands out in it's blankness. It doesn't have to anything complicated, I don't think. Maybe a simple landscape. What you've got is really great though. Good luck finishing it up!
You'll be fine. I have a hard time getting my original style, too... There's so many awesome artists! But yeah, do whatever though. I think with your skills, you can make anything look good. ^_^ Good luck!
I think a city-scape or some building and a few clouds might finish it off nicely :D
I like her clothing and especially those sleeves and the pose is amazing.
Really nice of you to draw your co-workers something <3
i actually got grossly imfluenced by hellobaby from dA's work
cuz i started out trying to draw myself
then i wanted to make myself seem better looking
so i made it cuter looking
and everything just devianted from that =3=
and now its not even my style anymore >.<
WOW! The detail on this is really good, especially on her clothes. ^_^ I say you leave as is... if you put too, too much on there then it's gonna be too busy. Simplicity is best for this one. :D
LOL! Just re-read and realized that you said maso and not macho
Nah, I wouldn’t put YOU into a can, because that’d involve cutting you into little pieces and compressing everything to fit into the can. That, would kill you. Nono, I want something special and longer lasting for you
-evil smirk-
Hint, it involves chains, cage, and lots of toys
-innocent blink-
COLOR IT! *is being maso*
Hmmm... The background seems a bit empty, but I don't suggest anything fancy because there are lots of details. Maybe a road, or the sky at her feet with a few stars and a city above her. A surreal bg.
Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
It's a cute picture and she has love hair and a cute outfit~~~ O: except I find that her legs are kind of odd in proportion and size...? It seems like the lower part of her legs are 2/3 of what they need to be in length O:
But telling by the size of the paper... I think it'd be okay to just leave it like that.
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XD i love it! It gives them the message 'Hey I most likely never have to see you again hooray *balloons release* XD jk jk srsly, it's good the way it is and It's so sweet that you're drawing a pic for them. I really think you don't need anything more. Maybe a few random things around her legs and the flowers >.> Idk, my brain ain't working right XD
Michiyo Shimizu
Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/03/10 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
Well not that it's that bad D': LOL ;;
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Wakusei Aoshi
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply
I love the shading and all the details! It looks so pretty! I like it the way it is with only the balloons coloured! :D
I see a problem with the legs. The one in the front looks skinnier than the one in the back...which...shouldn't be...O.o So maybe if you make the front one a bit thicker than that'd fix the problem!
Dunno if anybody else said the same thing, though...I didn't read ALL of the comments...
Oh, yes I did...XDFalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply
@ajLOVEStobi:
YESS!!!
you're the only one who noticed
yeah, i was grossly influenced by her stuff
cuz i wanted something cute
so i browsed through her gallery
and picked up a few tricks XD
ajLOVEStobi
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/27/10 | Reply
Aww! Shes really cute :) You are good. Reminds me of hellobaby's art from off of deviant art. My only thing is from the knee down looks a bit short to me and maybe add a simple background. :) Good luck, its going to turn out great ^-^
red:leaf
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
It's really cute so far. Maybe add a horizon, a bit of a background? With the images in the forefront, the background really stands out in it's blankness. It doesn't have to anything complicated, I don't think. Maybe a simple landscape. What you've got is really great though. Good luck finishing it up!
Captain Ronnie
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
I like it the way it is. especially how the balloons are colored but nothing else it. :)
superstarpanou
Question Cafér (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
You'll be fine. I have a hard time getting my original style, too... There's so many awesome artists! But yeah, do whatever though. I think with your skills, you can make anything look good. ^_^ Good luck!
DixieWings
Daydreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
I think a city-scape or some building and a few clouds might finish it off nicely :D
I like her clothing and especially those sleeves and the pose is amazing.
Really nice of you to draw your co-workers something <3
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@superstarpanou:
i actually got grossly imfluenced by hellobaby from dA's work
cuz i started out trying to draw myself
then i wanted to make myself seem better looking
so i made it cuter looking
and everything just devianted from that =3=
and now its not even my style anymore >.<
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@:
thanksss
what about some simple fluf clouds though?
superstarpanou
Question Cafér (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
WOW! The detail on this is really good, especially on her clothes. ^_^ I say you leave as is... if you put too, too much on there then it's gonna be too busy. Simplicity is best for this one. :D
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@SakuraDust:
Cha
you know how sex depribed i am XD
Yammy Riyalgo
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
Add some confetti or some sort of "dreamy colors" in the background.
SakuraDust
Moderator | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
My, my... and you're the seme who just can't help getting turned on huh? >3
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@SakuraDust:
You're always the one who start this!!!! D=
or at least encourage it =3=
you're like those seductive mischivous ukes that just brings out the pervert in the seme >.<
SakuraDust
Moderator | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
Omg, every comment, conversation of our reaches this perverted point doesn't it? XDDD
Moofins
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@FalseDelusion:
I can see there being some swirly clouds or some sparkles, like confetti-shaped mebbes...
I think it's her hands and the how she looks like she's spinning through the air.
Last edited by Moofins at 8:59:13 AM CDT on August 26, 2010.
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@Shi Bum Bumm:
i need to write all these good suggestions down =D
Shi Bum Bumm
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
Since her hands are out and in a whirl motion, maybe she can be making a whoosh with clouds around her :D Because it's really whimsical.
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@SakuraDust:
LOL! Just re-read and realized that you said maso and not macho
Nah, I wouldn’t put YOU into a can, because that’d involve cutting you into little pieces and compressing everything to fit into the can. That, would kill you. Nono, I want something special and longer lasting for you
-evil smirk-
Hint, it involves chains, cage, and lots of toys
-innocent blink-
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@Michiyo Shimizu:
you think so too?? Q____Q
k, i'll fix that XD
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@reirei18 :
of course you'd fit!! D=
omg, i googled where i'll be staying...
IT'S SO FAR!!
like, by driving, google says it'd take 38 minutes Q__Q
FalseDelusion
Emperor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
@SakuraDust:
D8
k, i might go with that >.<
THANKSSs
SakuraDust
Moderator | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
COLOR IT! *is being maso*
Hmmm... The background seems a bit empty, but I don't suggest anything fancy because there are lots of details. Maybe a road, or the sky at her feet with a few stars and a city above her. A surreal bg.
15385bic
Lazy Chocobikies (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
=D
i like the lack of colour in the rest of the pic besides the balloons >_< - i say leave it
she's so cute >_< - and i love ur clothes-sense XD - the detail is amazing ~
Michiyo Shimizu
Queen of theO � (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
It's a cute picture and she has love hair and a cute outfit~~~ O: except I find that her legs are kind of odd in proportion and size...? It seems like the lower part of her legs are 2/3 of what they need to be in length O:
But telling by the size of the paper... I think it'd be okay to just leave it like that.
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stinamuffin
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
CoughColouritcoughXD i love it! It gives them the message 'Hey I most likely never have to see you again hooray *balloons release* XD jk jk srsly, it's good the way it is and It's so sweet that you're drawing a pic for them. I really think you don't need anything more. Maybe a few random things around her legs and the flowers >.> Idk, my brain ain't working right XD
reirei18
reirei18.com (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/26/10 | Reply
eh.... wip...? epic..... @v@!
i think it looks fine as it is.... o.o but yeh.. "colour it" but i doubt i'll fit in a coke can.. lol..
i like how there's bits of colours in this picture.. and... amazing details.... awesome work..~~<3
*hugs* rei..~~<3