The face: It looks good, except the hair looks a bit awkward. Maybe you should do less of a curve on the top most hair line. The body: Her body seems to increase in size as it goes down. Where her forearms begin could be a little smaller (lessen the curve going outwards).
Her legs seem a bit too long compared to the rest of her body; it would probably look better if they were shortened just a little and perhaps change the size of her feet accordingly.
Good to have senpai back in business! :D
Traditional? But senpai are good with digital art!!! :O
Anyway, I like this artwork, it's neat and she looks happy and cute!! :D
saekimidori
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/22/10 | Reply
The face: It looks good, except the hair looks a bit awkward. Maybe you should do less of a curve on the top most hair line.
The body: Her body seems to increase in size as it goes down. Where her forearms begin could be a little smaller (lessen the curve going outwards).
Her legs seem a bit too long compared to the rest of her body; it would probably look better if they were shortened just a little and perhaps change the size of her feet accordingly.
Overall, it looks quite good. =)
ecnelisterger
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/19/10 | Reply
Good to have senpai back in business! :D
Traditional? But senpai are good with digital art!!! :O
Anyway, I like this artwork, it's neat and she looks happy and cute!! :D
zeainab
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/18/10 | Reply
nice, i really like it
vmpgrl
Grand Otaku | Posted 09/18/10 | Reply
To cute! i love it!