The face: It looks good, but it could probably look better if you shortened it just a little. The body: Her torso looks okay by itself, but the rest of her body seems to become kind of loose. You should add a slightly more obvious curve below her waist, for the hips, and shorten the length of her thighs. And when you do that, you should also shorten the length of her arms.
Overall, your drawing just looks very long, and you should try to shorten everything, including her hips a bit.
P.S. I like her face, and the layers you did on the dress. =)
saekimidori
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/22/10 | Reply
The face: It looks good, but it could probably look better if you shortened it just a little.
The body: Her torso looks okay by itself, but the rest of her body seems to become kind of loose. You should add a slightly more obvious curve below her waist, for the hips, and shorten the length of her thighs. And when you do that, you should also shorten the length of her arms.
Overall, your drawing just looks very long, and you should try to shorten everything, including her hips a bit.
P.S. I like her face, and the layers you did on the dress. =)