hmmm...
luv her face expression....
and the placement of curls on her waist is good ..
colors are good they don't sting the viewers eye...
they only thing that looks off is the breaking lines of both the elbows
especially the one thats behind her!!
rest everything looks good !!
Good Work!!
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
Since you asked for critique, here you go^^ I hope you don't find it offensive or anything
First of all, I really like the character design! The hair and skirt are probably my favourite parts^^ The anatomy looks pretty good all in all, except maybe for her right arm (left arm on the picture) But that's probably just because of the position of the sketch lines. The background is slightly random, and personally, I don't really think that all the shades of green fit that well together, but I do agree with you that green's a pretty colour! Nice job all in all *hugs*
Carbon Frost
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/13/10 | Reply
hmmm...
luv her face expression....
and the placement of curls on her waist is good ..
colors are good they don't sting the viewers eye...
they only thing that looks off is the breaking lines of both the elbows
especially the one thats behind her!!
rest everything looks good !!
Good Work!!
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
@Driffter:
You're welcome, it was my pleasure^__^ I'm glad you appreciated it!:)
Driffter
Absentminded One (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
@SaxGirl:
Thanks for your really honest opinion! I really appreciate you taking your time to critique this drawing. :D
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
Since you asked for critique, here you go^^ I hope you don't find it offensive or anything
First of all, I really like the character design! The hair and skirt are probably my favourite parts^^ The anatomy looks pretty good all in all, except maybe for her right arm (left arm on the picture) But that's probably just because of the position of the sketch lines. The background is slightly random, and personally, I don't really think that all the shades of green fit that well together, but I do agree with you that green's a pretty colour! Nice job all in all *hugs*
~S.G~
krokun
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/04/10 | Reply
nice colors!!! i really like how this looks!