Sounds good. Thanks! I was going to do more reflection on the people from the water too, so I think anything to do with water is a good bet. >< Thanks for helping!!
Chibi Artist Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/20/10 | Reply
I like how you've played with the light and shadow, and the people's poses are good. The only thing that may need some tweaking is the water. Maybe add some spots of light for contrast? Make it a little bluer? Whatever suits you. ^^
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/21/10 | Reply
@tallily21:
You're welcome!
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Otakuite+ | Posted 12/21/10 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
Okay, sounds good, I'll see if I can make her look less flat...I'll be working on it more over break. Thanks for your help!
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/20/10 | Reply
You know, I was just about to say that the water looked a little too dark, too.
Also, I think the girl looks a little bit flat. Maybe you should cast some shadows from the trees on her as well.
Other than that, I really like it. Great attention to detail!
Good luck in the contest!
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Otakuite+ | Posted 12/20/10 | Reply
@kita mikichi:
Sounds good. Thanks! I was going to do more reflection on the people from the water too, so I think anything to do with water is a good bet. >< Thanks for helping!!
kita mikichi
Chibi Artist Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/20/10 | Reply
I like how you've played with the light and shadow, and the people's poses are good. The only thing that may need some tweaking is the water. Maybe add some spots of light for contrast? Make it a little bluer? Whatever suits you. ^^