@//o//@ If he will look even sexier ...I'll wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *determined look* hahahaha ... I love your style!! ~<3 *Random comment* xP
Ah, well as far as that goes, I was thinking it was the hip to shoulder ratio, I think that's where I went wrong. Checking the arm, though, I did find the elbow dent was supposed to be closer to front, even though I checked my own elbow while I was drawing it... I think I got the directions confused and wasn't paying attention. I made some alterations to the lineart in places, and I think it looks a bit better, now.
Hey, looking good so far! I'd love to see the colored version. Your computer must be pretty badass, lol.
As for advice on the perspective, I can't really say that I'll be helping by saying this since I'm far from an expert myself, but it appears that his right arm - the one on the left - is foreshortened a bit too much for the particular angle you drew him in, or maybe his torso and legs are jutting forward a little excessively. Like I said, I'm probably wrong and you did far better than I think I could on this. <333
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/20/11 | Reply
@krokun:
=OAO= ... You never know, I could do something completely different or something bizarre... =>_>;= *cries from being predictable* orz
... J/k XD;;
krokun
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/20/11 | Reply
@Kitty K.O.:
knowing your coloring style, I know he'll look SUPER AWESOME AND SEXY! XDDDDD hahahahahha
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/20/11 | Reply
@krokun:
Lol... and what if he doesn't...? =>.>;= ... XD; lol
Oh, thank yous~! X3 <33
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/20/11 | Reply
@SaiKat:
Then maybe you should draw a hateable character X3
Ahaha, thank you =D
krokun
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/20/11 | Reply
@Kitty K.O.:
@//o//@ If he will look even sexier ...I'll wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *determined look* hahahaha ... I love your style!! ~<3 *Random comment* xP
SaiKat
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/20/11 | Reply
HOT! <333 ahaha sexy computer ya got there~ I wanna try this! XD But I hate my computer right now...Maybe for fun one day though lol
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
@krokun:
Ahaha X3 Oh gawsh, thank you X3 Wait till you see what his hair looks like in color! >=D Ehehe~
Kitty K.O.
Digital Neko (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
@Summer Daydream:
It is! >=D He's totally badarse! X3 Lol Thanks =3
Ah, well as far as that goes, I was thinking it was the hip to shoulder ratio, I think that's where I went wrong. Checking the arm, though, I did find the elbow dent was supposed to be closer to front, even though I checked my own elbow while I was drawing it... I think I got the directions confused and wasn't paying attention. I made some alterations to the lineart in places, and I think it looks a bit better, now.
Thanks for your suggestion =D
krokun
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
your laptop as a human is HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!! me wants him
god I love his hairstyle, expression, style, pose, body... EVRYTHING!!!!!!!!!
Summer Daydream
Mahou Shoujo (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/19/11 | Reply
Hey, looking good so far! I'd love to see the colored version. Your computer must be pretty badass, lol.
As for advice on the perspective, I can't really say that I'll be helping by saying this since I'm far from an expert myself, but it appears that his right arm - the one on the left - is foreshortened a bit too much for the particular angle you drew him in, or maybe his torso and legs are jutting forward a little excessively. Like I said, I'm probably wrong and you did far better than I think I could on this. <333